
In an Anime Crossover: Getting It Up for Kitagawa Marin from the Start!
人在综漫:开局硬挺喜多川海梦!
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 234k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
75Chapters
1.1MReads
12.1kFlowers
9.9Score
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Reader comments 42
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The lack of chakra in the world has nothing to do with the protagonist. If I remember correctly, ninjas should not need to draw anything from the atmosphere to refine chakra, right? It's not about senjutsu chakra. In the first chapter, the protagonist comes to a world without chakra. It would be ridiculous to save some of the chakra in his body. If the air in the Naruto world is full of chakra, there are some pupil techniques, and the sensory ninjutsu are not all ineffective. Ninjutsu users who can absorb other people's chakra have not had any plots of sucking air.
There is a problem in the first chapter. Chakra is grown through synthesis in the body, right? Why must we use it sparingly? As for the external environment, it is set to natural energy, right?
First of all, let me praise Se Se for her good writing, and then I **, the chakra setting is not clear to Yun Hokage. There is no chakra in the atmosphere after traveling through the atmosphere, so chakra cannot be extracted. Why is the protagonist so weak and spiritless? What a fake person. When teaching Kitagawa how to extract chakra, the quantifiers used to describe the size of water droplets and the size of water cups are also amazing. How about writing fantasy?
Author, please update it quickly, otherwise I will launch a major investigation against you.
Let's not talk about the strange setting of abilities and the system that has no sense of existence. The author's awareness of drug avoidance is quite full. It seems that he is fully protected at the moment. Even if he is particularly concerned about the setting of abilities, I think it will be a bit ** at the beginning. The strength of the protagonist is also a bit strange. Everyone feels threatened and dangerous. I don't feel that the protagonist has the strength to be able to control the scene.
Uh-huh, Kitagawa is an orphan.
Author, you'd better let the protagonist conquer Hinata, Hanabi, Koso, Kurenai, and save Izumi before traveling again.
In order to open a harem, I am willing to change Puck. The chakra system has so many shortcomings that I am reluctant to change it. I am really a hungry ghost in lust.
The Rinnegan Eye and the Sharingan Eye are not directly related, they are different eyes. Theoretically, as long as you have the power of Indra and Asura, you can directly open the Rinnegan Eye even if you are not an Uchiha. If you use the Sharingan Eye to use the Rinnegan Eye, you still have to switch back.
Is your update worthy of your name?