Daqing: Biological Mother Ye Qingmei, Raised by the Eldest Princess

There is no Su Huai who saves the world, he is just a captain who dreams of saving Ji Zi...

Wouldn't the subsequent plot be written without him?

Like Sakura in the author, Sakura in the first few chapters has been transformed, so the subsequent rescue of Sakura is just self-deception.

It's wordy, it's submissive when you have the strength, it's boring to play house. You're such a piece of shit

How many people are under the command of the Grand Master, and they still haven't defeated Emperor Qing.

Is it someone who is overwhelming their fighting power again?

After reading the first chapter, can the author figure out whether it was someone else who traveled through the Silly Pillar and revived his body, or whether it was the Silly Pillar who passed through his soul and returned to his youth after his death? I really don't understand

Is Zhu Bajie stupid? How much attention is paid to watching TV?

There are so many mistakes. The protagonist is sometimes Fan Xian, sometimes Li Changsheng, and sometimes Li Chengqian.

*It's like shit. The ninth level of the physical body is equal to the master. If you reach the eighth level of the supernatural power level, you have to use all your strength.

Although I like the female characters in DXD very much, the difference in combat power is not too big. I feel like any fallen angel soldier is an SSS ghoul and a top stringer.

It's best not to have a female protagonist. Nowadays, writing novels seems like you can't live without a woman! Mortal emperors who achieve great things don't have much lust, let alone Da Luo, who is addicted to seven emotions and six desires and wants nothing more! Only mortals can be burdened by lust.

Very ****, CS who killed his biological mother

Didn't I say earlier that the great master and bad guy Yuan Tiangang was also a subordinate of Li Changsheng? . . . In addition to Zhao Gao, there are only two great masters under his command. . .

Lin Wan'er is the male protagonist's sister, right? I wrote before that the male protagonist is three years old! Why do you call me brother later? What did the author write? Can you change it and check it carefully?

The emotional scenes you write are direct enough, I like them very much. But no matter what happens next, we have to give the protagonist something to worry about, right? Otherwise, how can we go to the national competition? There are a lot of monsters and monsters in the national competition. . .

This book aims to consume the popularity of IP. By stacking cliché elements such as time travellers, system cheats, and harem competition, the original work's depth of power and human struggle are downgraded into a low-level novel. Its confusing logic, flat characters, and rough text are not only an insult to the original work, but also a violation of the bottom line of online literary creation. If you long for a dual feast of intelligence and emotion, this book is undoubtedly the best negative teaching material.

Isn't it just that the Conferred God has higher martial arts-level combat power? The leader of Tongtian's Immortal Killing Formation vs. The four major leaders can only shake the mountains.,,

Is the protagonist Lin Wan'er's younger brother or older brother?

Can you hide the equipment? The equipment is so ugly

The protagonist looks really like a programmed robot.

This season of longing for life is not easy

It was fine in the beginning, but I feel like it started to get sluggish in the later stages. Could it be that the plot of this world is almost over and it started to get sluggish, with all kinds of dragging?

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