Gourmet: My Cooking Makes You Explode Out of Your Clothes and Ascend to Heaven

After reading twenty chapters, I feel that the two chapters of Food Fantasy, Demon King Paradise and Water are too exaggerated. Fantasy can exist, but don't you think it's unnecessary to write two chapters? If you don't push the plot, it would be awkward and the word count is too high. Also, don't write about a fantasy where the female character you want to accept is taken advantage of. Although I know it's a fantasy, it's easy to react to it. Some strict demons can't accept it. The part about Isshiki Huiguo's apron is also not too big or too small. You need to pay attention to it. I think the problems are about these in Chapter 20. I'll look at it later. Look, this is not looking for trouble, it is a drug that can easily be caught. If you think it is nosy, just pretend you didn't see it. I'll just withdraw. I think it's not bad and don't want to cut it off, so I will give you a few suggestions. I hope I can accept Mrs. Leonora in a reasonable way. It's so delicious. If you can come up with an explanation, it would be good. If it doesn't work, forget it.

The school year in Japan starts in April, and Yukihira also said during the school year accommodation, don't underestimate the coldness in April. Japan has a three-semester system, which is different from China. You wrote it as August. Remember to change it.

The protagonist is so well-written and free-spirited, and the female character's provocations are all just flirting, with no response at all.

Some parts of my conception of "Fat House" touched on the poisonous point. As I have no writing experience, I saw the comments from book friends, but I didn't get it. I thought they were just insults. My thinking was still based on the original animation. It wasn't until I saw some book friends scolding me that I thought it was necessary to talk to the editor. I received professional guidance. After communicating with the editor, I realized where I went wrong. The brothers took the time to read what Lao Feizhai wrote and commented on it. I was very concerned about the shortcomings. I tried my best to improve and revise them to give everyone a good experience. Chapter 27 has been revised. Thank you brothers for your support.

Dear author, haven't you finished the pictures yet?

Commentary on Chapter 5: Invitation Letter from Totsuki Academy, "Gourmet: My Cooking Will Make You Fly to Heaven" written by Hizaku Quanwang.

Commentary on the first chapter of "Food: My Cuisine Will Make You Fly to Heaven" written by Feizhai Quanwang.

Comments on Chapter 13: The Test of Ji Xing Lao: The Dinner Party, "Food: My Food Will Make You Fly to Heaven" written by Fei Zhai Quan Wang.

I have found a new job. I go out to run business every day. My feet hurt when I walk. My steps on WeChat are **+. I have not earned any money. I have walked a lot. When I get home, I am so tired that I don't want to move. There are too few updates. Please pay attention to me, brothers. There is a song to sing. We are all living hard.

Commentary on Chapter 16: Trapped in the Demon King's Paradise (Part 2), "Food: My Cuisine Will Make You Fly to Heaven" written by Feizhai Quanwang.