I, Daddy Roger, Start the Game with Big Devil Piccolo

作者油饼吧？你在宋朝，让宋亡了对你有什么好处？自立为王？还有在找下家？自立为王我没啥好说的，再找下家你这就不厚道了。。。

There are big problems with your book. Although I can read it, others may not be able to. Let me summarize for you the poisonous points that appear in your book and are now considered by most people. The first point is soul penetration. Although I don't really care about it, soul penetration is a big poisonous point in current Internet articles, especially on Feilu. The second point is that even if the soul passes through, he is still a dying old man. This is another Xiao Lei. The third point is to change the inherent settings of the original work without permission. You have to know that original characters written in fan fiction are not recognized by many people. If you change the settings of the original work, you will step on another big mistake. In the first chapter, the soul-piercing old man wants to give birth to a baby. There are two big thunders and one small thunder. Many people may click on it and let it go*. The fourth point is to force water filling, let's talk about your task panel. Even if it has a slight change, I will accept it, but there is obviously no progress. You copy and paste the whole thing, and then you still say three zeroes? The fifth point, if I can't write anymore, write in the reply.