Ranking the Most Glorious Contrasts: The Heavens Die of Embarrassment on the Spot

There is no reward for exposure. Are you planning to kill someone? You also exposed Funina. Her plan is related to the life and death of the entire country. You also wrote a timeline before the plan failed. How about you?

The writing doesn't fit the characters, at least the Immortal Lord doesn't fit in. It's impossible for him to say something like "My destiny is up to me and I can't help it. What do you think Nezha is?"

Does Honkai Impact Rail have a multiverse? Don't write randomly

I haven't read the content yet, I just looked at the table of contents, but the author, even if there is a contrast between them, as long as their contrast is not too bad, then they shouldn't be ridiculed. Just like Xiao Yan, although he is being hunted, he can still shine like Emperor Yan, and he is weak and is hunted down. Although he is a little embarrassed, he is not ridiculed, right? Of course, maybe your title is a bit exaggerated, but it's not that bad in reality, or maybe you didn't include the Yan Emperor and the like, but only thirty years in Hedong and thirty years in Hexi. But I feel that if you really want to write about it, it's best to put them at their peak, instead of just showing a not-so-splendid clip. Just like fighting against Xiao Yan, you should write about his peak when he became the Supreme Lord of the Endless Fire Domain. I think that would be more contrasting.

The realm is chaotic, and the value of force is unclear... Let's not talk about the many common faults of inventory novels. You don't even know the identity of the world... Is the world of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality comparable to the Zhetian Trilogy and Prehistoric World? It's not even close to Xian Ni, and its world status is not as high as it... I took a rough look at the catalog, but I didn't dare to take a look... In novels with themes such as All Worlds, Chat **, etc., Many authors are prone to make mistakes: the world's status and realm are confused... It stands to reason that a person who often reads novels or writes novels has read some novels. How can he be so unable to distinguish the general status and combat power of the world... This is not an isolated case but a common problem among many novels or authors...

Other people in this book do not fit the character, but my character, Immortal Lord, is very consistent with Immortal Lord. The ultimate rational representative is my eternal belief, especially the sentence "Today's death is just a prelude to reaching the top in the future]" "Kill decisively! No mercy! Careful and careful! Work step by step. Using heaven and earth as a chessboard, I have jumped out of the world and all living beings are chess pieces.

Don't tell me that behind the sky is the perfect world, and behind it is the holy ruins? It's obviously the same worldview, but if we split the past, present and future into three, there are flaws, right?

What are you writing about? It's true that the episode about Emperor Yan was played until he was the Great Supreme, and then you played the dark history of his childhood. What the hell is this?

Can the author please write an inventory of fan fiction?

Emperor Huang Tian was obviously the Immortal Emperor who broke through after being killed by the Corpse Immortal Emperor. At this time, he had the ability to instantly kill the Four Dark Emperors!