Chat Group: In the World of Battle Qi, I Begin Preaching to the Heavens

Talented author, when did Dou Po World reach the realm of a great emperor? And the setting is also very **this kind of apprenticeship novel also sets the protagonist as a 15-year-old who has just entered the first realm of spiritual practice and is still a waste.** What can he teach? He is a waste. The author is also an idiot for writing this kind of article.

A gift to a woman, time travel so early Xiao Xun'er didn't cut off her beard, so she gave it away anyway.

The main character in "The Disciple" is only 15 years old. It's really uncomfortable to watch. He's still a loser.

The idea is good, but the writing is not very good. All disciples are given fire attribute skills regardless of their attributes. Huang Rong and others from the martial arts world are okay. I think Xue Qi is practicing thunder attribute skills, right? I was convinced too. Either you create a high-level skill with no attributes that can be transformed by yourself, or you give the skill of each attribute in the gift package. In the future, let him learn fire-attribute skills from a water-attribute person?

Such a silly protagonist, this book is really awesome

Lu Zi's harem novel accepts a bunch of male apprentices, even supporting roles, is it too? Afraid of death

It's best not to write less plots where the world suddenly changes or is invaded. Such plots are not exciting at all. It's okay once, but those who often write this kind of plot will basically fall apart later on, and most readers don't like the feeling of this kind of thing suddenly being out of control.

I couldn't stop watching the first picture. I wanted to lick it to relieve inflammation.

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the little praise starts to sound, and the number of dead harvests starts to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are 20 years old, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates.

Okay, it looks okay, it's a bit unique