An Unusually Scientific Railgun

After writing like this, do you still want to accept Xiaolan? Just say it and you won't accept it, I just won't look at it. But as you wrote, Xiaolan obviously likes Shinichi, and Conan even lives in Xiaolan's house. Didn't you know that Conan would peek at Xiaolan taking a bath? Damn it, the tauren are all dead, Fei Lu has transformed?

What era did this LJ stuff come from? It offended everyone who accepted Xiaolan but not Xiaolan. He was a talented person. He accepted Xiaolan to help Conan take a bath. If he didn't accept Xiaolan, he would be biased. Others in Qingshan only had a good impression of each other at the beginning, but what has happened to you?

Is this a harem story? If so, can you be more direct? If not, just say it. The heroine's writing is a mess.

First of all, as the author, I have my reasons for causing book lovers to argue about the content of the novel. If there is anything that makes you misunderstand, I would like to apologize here. What follows is my opinion, which may contain spoilers: First: Xiaolan is the predetermined heroine, there is no doubt about it. But there is a problem with the starting point of Xiaolan's character, that is, she and Kudo are childhood sweethearts, and the two have a good impression of each other. If Mao Lilan falls into the arms of the protagonist after only experiencing one or two things, this in itself is destroying the image of Mao Lilan as a character. Therefore, there is a gradual change process in my setting, and later there will be a plot for Xiaolan to make a decision. Second: Some book friends also suggested that I enhanced the emotional plot between Kudo Shinichi and Mao Lilan. Except at the beginning of the book, Kudo Shinichi never appeared again. Most of the time it happens on the phone. This is also the sense of gap I deliberately created. Compared to the direct protection of the protagonist, Kudo Shinichi's greeting on the phone seemed very perfunctory, and I also showed Mao Lilan's disappointment in Kudo Shinichi three or five times. Unfortunately, no one seemed to notice this. Third: Regarding Conan's stay at Maori's house. Many people feel that Conan takes advantage of Xiaolan. However, I also wrote in Chapter 4 that Misaka asked Mao Lilan to be wary of children, and later also implicitly expressed Mao Lilan's defense against children. Maybe it was my lack of writing skills that caused book friends to misunderstand. Moreover, there are many plots in Conan, and I cannot write every episode. All the plots that I have not shown do not exist. Fourth: This book is a harem novel with many female protagonists. But book friends who have read my previous books may understand that I introduce the heroine based on the plot, not the plot for the heroine. The most basic element of a novel is a story, and I hope I can write my own story to share with you. If you have any misunderstandings or suggestions, please say it in the comments and use polite language. Thank you.

The protagonist created such a strong feeling in the early stage Now being besieged by a group of power users who are neither up to nor down is about to die...

The writing is so strong, and then I got entangled by a bunch of karami. It's amazing.

Isn't that right? Since the mercury lamp is known to Zhenhong and the others, how can they get it and make a contract with others? Zhenhong and the others were extracted by the protagonist using a Rubik's Cube, so how did others get the mercury lamp?

Tell Xiaolan that there is something about Conan's identity that can't be written about. There are a lot of female characters on this website who have all become untouchable novels. Laugh, this is nothing.

The protagonist needs to save a hundred souls to draw a lucky draw of items from all over the world. Doesn't it mean that he can get a hundred rewards in one draw, but the protagonist can only get one reward, and then ninety-nine are randomly distributed to other people in the world? After all, it's understandable that you set up the world of Conan to only have superpowers, but the protagonist just drew a rose girl who didn't belong to this world, and then turned around and contracted a mercury lamp with someone else? So the abilities of those superpowers are all given away by Goldfinger when the protagonist draws prizes again and again?

There's nothing to complain about. I think Xiaolan's behavior is normal when Conan's identity is exposed. It's for your own good not to reveal your identity. Normally speaking, if the black organization's identity is exposed, everyone nearby will definitely be killed.