
American Comics: Sign-In with the Ben 10 Omnitrix, Steal Gwen
美漫:签到少年骇客表,截胡格温
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 780k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Film & TV Fanfiction
- Updated
- 10mo ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
439Chapters
5.1MReads
9.9kFlowers
9.5Score
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I hope there won't be any weird things like the protagonist having his watch taken away and being unable to transform. Anyway, there shouldn't be any bloody events like having the protagonist's watch robbed.
He is a stingy straight male protagonist, and Stark seems to have some influence.
Mordo attacks the Sanctuary, Doctor Strange is still new to magic and then the Ancient One is still alive? Is he so brave? Who gave it to Liang?
How many times has the protagonist's house been robbed, and there really are no protection measures at all?
The character of the male protagonist is like a piece of shit, I don't know what kind of person he wants to express. It's like a hodgepodge: I want to be a villain, I want to be a decent person, I want to be a nanny, and I want to not eat beef. It's like schizophrenia, you can't get into it at all. He was coy about this and that with Wanda, but as a result, he treated Gwen as a rbq at the first sight. But you can't say how good you are to Wanda. She said she wanted to find her brother but you didn't let her go. But when Kuaiyin died, you still pretended to comfort her. Really, I vomited when I saw it
This article asks others to question the protagonist's strength, disbelief, and fear over and over again.
I really can't help it. I have to complain about too many things, and I'm not talking about the other settings and character settings. You're just messing it up. Even the movie version of Ancient One would not be so arrogant in saying that people have time stones. Unless you have time paradox, Ancient One can basically see it. Otherwise, Ancient One can see the future, but he knows what the protagonist will do in the future. Basically, the plot is too trivial, and I am not only shocked but shocked. It makes my head spin. It's not that you want to express the gap between superheroes and alien heroes. You can't express it like this. I can only say that the expression is too naive, and the more you look at it, the less interesting it becomes. After that, it gradually turned into the protagonist of a pornographic novel. To be honest, I felt it was a bit bright in the early stage, but in the later stage it became mediocre and could no longer be mediocre. I could only treat it as an instant noodle novel and just take a look at it. After all, the method behind is basically a super villain that comes from a routine. After defeating the superhero, the protagonist comes to save the scene. This is meaningless and too simple.
Extremely poisonous! Still a tauren! This protagonist has the strength and no trouble! He also noted that it was done on purpose! Isn't that more poisonous!
Why not a small horse and a big cart?
The protagonist's character is too hot and you won't like it. No matter how well you write it, if the character of the protagonist is not good, it just won't work!