Everyday Life in an Anime Crossover: I Loaded the Loser-Girl Collector

I have a question now, does the author really know the preferences of Feilu readers? Can the plot of Silkworm Rumor be written as the main plot? Who does the reader bring in? Bringing in a male protagonist who can't deal with rumors for more than ten or twenty chapters? Can this kind of heart-wrenching plot be the main plot? Instead of writing cool stories, you write heart-wrenching plots instead? And doesn't your protagonist plan to have a harem? If you plan, why are you afraid that Yukinoshita has too much advantage? What are the advantages of all of them? You yourself said that you have extraordinary abilities in the future, why are you afraid that Yukinoshita's advantage will be too great? Are you speaking human language? You are not arguing here, what are you afraid of? You are a harem, aren't you? If you have the advantage, just accept it. Isn't it awkward to show the protagonist to the readers? Now I feel that your protagonist is a nurturing person who can't take in girls. I'm afraid that the advantage is too great. Don't you think it's against the rules?

The plot of a stupid misunderstanding is nearly 100,000 words long, but it still fails to give the feeling of reversal. Did you write this book for yourself?

Haha, no Yinglili is good, Yinglili is not worthy of a defeated dog, pure CS.

It made me uncomfortable to watch it. A Japanese Asashi-style protagonist drags out an unresolved slander plot for more than ten or twenty chapters. The final treatment is also really uncomfortable to watch, just like you have been constipated for a week before you want to go to the toilet and fart. Yes, I am talking about you, the stupid protagonist, the way to deal with it is like a**. The Bull Demon has been laying the groundwork for so long and this is the result? There is a cool point about Gouba. Even if you say that you are writing about depression, it is better than this. And what you say you don't want to see a soulless heroine, as if you wrote a soulful heroine, but Yukino's treatment is just a piece of shit. The protagonist's ordinary friends all believe in the protagonist, but when it comes to Yukino, they just believe the rumors? The protagonist you wrote is really mean. He said he would never do it while rushing to lick her. Why should you be afraid that Yukino is progressing too fast? Those who aren't my buddies are already writing harem stories in Feilu. You insist on doing this, forcibly shaping Yukino into an enhanced version of Eiri.

I don't quite understand. The author said that accepting Yukinoshita first and then others will give the impression that she in this book is someone else wearing the cloak of "Yukikinoshita". However, the genuine Yukinoshita will not doubt her friends casually because of other people's rumors, because she was hurt by rumors when she was a child. In my impression, she should say to her friends, "I believe you in the rumors are not the real you, can you tell me the truth?", Carefully investigate the authenticity, and then provide help to her friends. If the author changed Yukinoshita's character because she couldn't let Yukinoshita progress too fast, then wouldn't Yukinoshita in this book still be someone else wearing the cloak of "Yukishita"?

All kinds of lines are written quite abstractly. It would be very unpleasant to start the story line with an incident where the male protagonist is falsely accused and has a bad reputation, and then the incident is delayed until it is released. The heroine Yukinoshita was given a very unpleasant flaw because outside criticism was self-indulgent in belittling the male protagonist whom she had known for a long time. The last person who did this was Eri-ri, a passerby. In Feilu, as long as Ahn Yilun appeared with the name, he would call for car accidents in the book review area and even start to scold the author. Everyone's ill will towards him almost overflowed. But when it comes to why Yingli lost the dog, no one would say that it was all his fault. At the end of the day, everyone was at fault. In the extreme, they even directly felt that it was all Yingli's fault. This is still a harem story, so Yukino's character can be finished. Unless there is something like a life-saving grace in the future, she can't be brought back. The career line is even more so. I only write one volume a week. Do you think it doesn't take time just to write the main character, calibrate, review, print, deliver and promote it?

The author's writing style is not bad, and he knows how to avoid lightning. The origin of Ellie's feelings for the protagonist is also very reasonable. However, the slanderous plot is too long, which indirectly makes the protagonist feel aggrieved. It defeats Fei Lu's refreshing rhythm, and the main plot is completely separated from the synopsis of the defeated dog. As a result, I haven't seen the plot of the defeated dog that I want to watch so far. But at least the author has good writing skills and can try to bring the characters to life. The results will be better if the plot is changed later.

After being slandered at the beginning, I read a few chapters, then glanced at the table of contents and jumped directly to the quarrel with Yukinoshita. Too abstract. Years of friendship are not as good as a rumor, especially when Yukinoshita clearly has some special feelings for the hero. Even more outrageous. If I had such a friend, I would probably slap him to death on the spot. I came out and took a look at the ratings and comments. Well, I was finally relieved.

What kind of misunderstanding happened at the beginning? You are useless.

I read your comment that it would solve the problem of the Inu heroine having a crush on someone else, so I decided to read it. But in the second chapter, Yana saw her childhood sweetheart chasing the person she liked. She felt sad all by herself, and then planned to secretly drink the leftover drink of the other person. The only difference from the original work is that the original one drank it, but you didn't drink it here. But isn't her first love someone else's problem that remains unresolved? There won't be similar plots later, right? This kind of setting feels like 90% of Lu Zi will be killed.