
Daily Comics: I Loaded the Lost Dog Collector
综漫日常:我加载了败犬收集器
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 127k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Audience
- For men
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Faloo
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1.2MReads
31.6kFlowers
8.5 · 2.5kScore
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I have a question now, does the author really know the preferences of Feilu readers? Can the plot of Silkworm Rumor be written as the main plot? Who does the reader bring in? Bringing in a male protagonist who can't deal with rumors for more than ten or twenty chapters? Can this kind of heart-wrenching plot be the main plot? Instead of writing cool stories, you write heart-wrenching plots instead? And doesn't your protagonist plan to have a harem? If you plan, why are you afraid that Yukinoshita has too much advantage? What are the advantages of all of them? You yourself said that you will have extraordinary abilities later on, why are you afraid that Yukinoshita's advantage will be too great? Are you speaking human language? You are not arguing here, what are you afraid of? You are a harem, aren't you? If you have an advantage, just accept it. Isn't it awkward to show the protagonist to the readers? Now I feel that your protagonist is a nurturing person who can't take in girls. I'm afraid that the advantage is too great. Don't you think it's against the law?
The plot of a stupid misunderstanding is nearly 100,000 words long, but it still fails to give the feeling of reversal. Did you write this book for yourself?
All kinds of lines are written quite abstractly. It would be very unpleasant to start the story line with an incident where the male protagonist is falsely accused and has a bad reputation, and then the incident is delayed until it is released. The heroine Yukinoshita was given a very unpleasant flaw because outside criticism was self-indulgent in belittling the male protagonist whom she had known for a long time. The last person who did this was Eri-ri, a passerby. In Feilu, as long as Ahn Yilun appeared with the name, he would call for car accidents in the book review area and even start to scold the author. Everyone's ill will towards him almost overflowed. But when it comes to why Yingli lost the dog, no one would say that it was all his fault. At the end of the day, everyone was at fault. In the extreme, they even directly felt that it was all Yingli's fault. This is still a harem story, so Yukino's character can be finished. Unless there is something like a life-saving grace in the future, she can't be brought back. The career line is even more so. I only write one volume a week. Do you think it doesn't take time just to write the main character, calibrate, review, print, deliver and promote it?
The defeated dog heroine? Does the protagonist like other people's leftovers?
Can you deal with the person who spread this rumor quickly? I feel aggrieved watching it. Don't give me a warning if you finally find the person spreading the rumor. After all, the daily world and the character of the male protagonist don't feel like you can feed this person to fish. Let's wait and see. Everything else is fine.
Qu Wen was really upset after seeing this.
It's a mess, the protagonist's name is sometimes called that, sometimes called this
Fl There are really very few fan fictions nowadays that are well written and can describe the emotional journey in detail. But the problem is the author. Have you ever thought about a problem? Instead of watching a slow, literary and even a bit useless protagonist, I would rather read a mindless and exciting novel. Do you know how disgusting you wrote Yukino? If you put this kind of person in real life, I would be considered a loser if I didn't slap her twice. If you do this, I suggest that when other heroines come to power, just pull her out and whip her corpse, and don't let her become a harem. In this way, the readers will be happy, and you will be relaxed. It is simply the best of both worlds.
How to say it. My feeling after reading it is that when I first awakened the system, I felt quite comfortable, but later on I felt a sense of suffocation, which was very unpleasant, because it was no longer like Shuangwen. When I first awakened the system, I felt very comfortable and had a feeling of ease, but then I didn't feel like this anymore. This feeling, the rumors have caused a sense of frustration, and I don't know who is responsible. Everyone looks at the protagonist through colored glasses, which is very uncomfortable. Furthermore, the protagonist is caught by the teacher while sleeping in class, and his body trembles. Can't the protagonist be unreasonable and strong? You need to be strong, and you no longer have that feeling of ease. In summary, the first few chapters are quite comfortable to read, but there is a sense of suffocation in the later chapters. This feeling is because nothing is under the control of the protagonist, so it is very unhappy. In the end, I hope that the person who spread the rumors will gradually discredit him or her and then brutally kill the culprit and erase the soul and true spirit of the murderer from the concept, in order to relieve the hatred in my heart.
Haven't seen n? At 35 seconds and 13 minutes, in addition to Tracy McGrady's incredible performance, there was also a major mistake by the Spurs. You have scored more than 40 points in 5 minutes, do you think the opponent is mentally retarded?
So Hualian is given to Chaoji? He looks pretty good-looking, but if he doesn't contribute to the plot, it feels like it would be better not to mention this person's name. Speaking of which, author, does your way of writing mean that in many of your subsequent writings, you only write about a few female protagonists? No other female supporting characters will be written? We Fei Lu, you are great if you can write about the missing girl. If you don't give the heroine to the protagonist, don't write it out. Don't even mention her name. Hurry up and flash out the story about Hua Lian and Chao Jie being in love. Don't show it.
Author, are you from Yongfeng County, Ji'an City, Jiangxi Province?
Wait a minute, Yinglili, why is there no Yinglili in the profile? Do you look down on us golden retriever losers?
Depending on the situation, is this still a cp with the male and female supporting actors from the original work Lost Dog?
Excuse me, **, I'm looking at you inexplicably.
I started reading it today. After reading it, I realized that it was probably TJ. After reading the comments, I found that the real flaw was okay. I just updated the issue. When I am following a book that is updated with more than ten or twenty chapters a day, the problems are even bigger and it can still be on the list. As long as this book is updated, all the problems are covered up.
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