
Comprehensive Comic: Starting from the Awakening of Lai Aotian Template
综漫:从觉醒莱傲天模版开始
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 210k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Audience
- For men
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Faloo
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10.0 · 561Score
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There are a lot of problems. Jizi knew that his name was Beloberg before he went to Yaliluo. As for the later cultivation techniques, who can't learn from Ye Fan and practice one kind of technique in each realm? Ye Fan has no choice. You who don't have the ancient divine body are simply looking for death. Even if you have a plug-in, does your disciple have it?
I really hate Liangbing
If someone demolishes your home and robs you of your belongings, why don't you just leave a few words and say yes? ? ?
It feels nondescript and terribly uncomfortable. I would rather have the characters in the puppet show with less force than Japanese anime characters.
I don't know why although the protagonist has Brother Jie's abilities, he doesn't feel like Brother Jie. The protagonist is like getting an alternative version of Akashi's Eye of God. But the most important skill of Jie Ge is his team guidance simulation ability. No matter how strong his opponent or his side is, as long as his vision is not above his, he will become his pawn, and he will eventually lead him to the ending he hopes for. This is the most perverted part of his ability. But once the protagonist meets the level of the author of the Age of Miracles, he is completely alone, and the team's ability is not seen at all. But this cannot be blamed on the author. After all, the Black Basketball Team is said to be a team. As long as the teammates are not as far apart as the Miracle Era and ordinary people, it depends on which side's ace is stronger. As long as the ace is enough to suppress the opponent's ace, even if the teammates are untitled five pairs against the protagonist group, ordinary people can beat them.
The protagonist is so neurotic that he may not be much different from a lunatic. Moreover, the characters in Junji Ito's works have also been reduced to intelligence. Why do you think the protagonist is good to Abe Yuma? If Abe Yuma is good to you, Abe Yuma will be good to you. He doesn't necessarily call you when summoning the devil. Maybe he will dissolve you first.
The subject matter is okay and the writing style is average. If you have the writing style of the little demon Konoha evil thief, it will be interesting.
It's different from ordinary male comics. It's equivalent to a Three Kingdoms fanfic. I hope it can continue to be updated, but what is the ending that the author plans to arrange? The protagonist plans to become emperor?
There is a BUG. Kuroba Kaito, whose age is officially set at 17 years old, will only be imprisoned in the Nara Juvenile Prison after being convicted and sentenced. However, according to Japan's judicial process, a court hearing cannot be held for more than half a year, so Kuroba Kaito should be in a detention center now, not a prison.
Didn't the author of re0 say that Lai Aotian is on the same level as the Bone King? And there are templates in this, right? Why dye your hair and wear contact lenses? It's not pretending
主角为什么不来个金融技能?这样一直没有经济来源?
I don't know anything about Death's power system or patriotism. All I know is that the protagonist has a pure diaosi personality! Those who are losers can no longer be losers! The first part was fine, but after more than 30 chapters, it became extremely swollen! Ward Maya! After all, the school beauty has supported you for so many days, this is called affection! Elder brother! What you enjoyed was not what she gave you, and she didn't say anything, so you just returned the box of gold coins? Ward Maya! I'm afraid I'm not out of my mind! The school beauty has a nice attitude and invites you to her house for dinner. If you are so stubborn about criticizing the school beauty, does it make the protagonist think that he is more respectable? ? Face twice as big? I asked you to come over in a nice voice and you are still pretending? I'm sorry, I'm sorry, I can't afford to offend you
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