Seafaring: I Just Want to Lie Flat, Yet I Became an Admiral

Seeing that the Demon Knife Thousand Blades is a golden item, I don't want to continue reading. The system's ** is visible to the naked eye.

Let's not talk about the plot and the like, they are all similar anyway, but your Mihawk's thoughts turned out to be the first-person thoughts of the protagonist, which makes it difficult to read. Various thoughts in Chapter 8 are clearly Mihawk's, but the person's pronoun is that of the protagonist.

From time to time, the so-called first person is switched to the third person's perspective, which seems very awkward, especially in Chapter 7. If you can't get good grades by writing like this, if you choose the third person, don't always turn to the first person.

There are so many of Felu's books that the plot has changed so much that the content should be changed?

I feel like the recent plot conflicts are a bit exaggerated.

Can you not use the word "water" as a passer-by in every chapter?

I thought about my golden soybean paste

Why is my golden general here???

Yeah, the Beijing dialect is authentic to One Piece

Why did you insert a chapter from another work between 9 and 10?