
Navigation: Loot the Kirby Entry at the Beginning!
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- For men
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- 16d ago
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I don't understand. Nowadays, whenever you write a doctor-type novel, the protagonist is an intern. I seem to understand that the author wants the protagonist to show off. It may be more satisfying to start from the bottom, but you must also follow the basic rules. At least the protagonist must have a medical qualification certificate. Otherwise, whoever comes to see a doctor, especially for surgery, dares to let the intern do it.
Overall, it's okay. The biggest flaw is that the whole world seems to be the size of a village. No matter how far away the enemy is, they can always arrive in time the next moment after receiving the message. Comparable to Doraemon. .
This fusion is not the Master, it is obviously the Sun Wukong from Wukong.
After killing Qing Pheasant, I have no physical strength. Why not kill a few lieutenant generals to replenish my physical strength? It is impossible to increase the level of lieutenant general. The recovery is still enough.
The content of this book is also quite to my liking, but I kind of want to know what Pig's Feet thinks about Usopp's father, because in my opinion, what is the attitude of a person who abandons his child and his lover for some so-called dream, and is not even willing to come back to see him again (?°??°?)
Is the protagonist still a virgin?
The writing of the battle was a bit too slow, and it was just boring to read over and over again. I wrote several chapters at a time, so it was a bit stained.
I would like to call you the strongest water king
There is no description at all as to whether the protagonist has eaten meat or not. It would be too disturbing to watch if the protagonist were an eternal eunuch.
The split fruit is not mediocre, right? It is the upgraded version of Gildarts from Fairy Tail after its awakening. I don't want to affect the development of the plot. I don't understand. If you say it is mediocre, I don't agree with it.
The Dragon King of Laughter and the Dragon King of Appreciation, except that these two are a bit awkward to read, they are fine.
The promise was fulfilled! I updated the word count by 25,000 in one go! Thank you all for your support all the way! Begging for a first order! Grateful!
The most comforting thing about this book is that the protagonist is very strong, and he shows it openly, as well as his trump cards. They can't do anything to me anyway, so why bother pretending to be a pig?
When will the protagonist be able to break through the limits of the world. Although Oda locked up his combat power to avoid expansion in the later period, the shortcomings are also obvious.
I've seen Chapter 150. It's good. It's a top-notch masterpiece. It's a rare masterpiece. But there are a few problems. The first problem is the combat power. Now the protagonist is almost at the top because the setting is cumulative, so as long as he defeats one more general, he will be invincible. The upper limit of the pirate's combat power is two generals, unless the setting is changed. There must be some people who don't buy it. Secondly, Akainu's combat power is too high. Just set Aokiji like you, let alone ten days, and it takes a lot of effort for one day. Of course, I know it has been patched, but that won't work. The combat power is still set too high. Thirdly, the last few chapters are too watery. It looks like a battle at the top. It's not okay to collapse at this climax stage.
When I saw Chapter 6, which said that the real person couldn't even find a book, I laughed my head off. He has cultivated to the level of a real person, but he doesn't even have spiritual consciousness? Compared with the low-matched prehistoric, the saint can compete with ten meters in one step. Can the immortals here really live forever? If you put it in other novels, I suspect that even the foundation-building elixir cannot be beaten, and they are all parallel imports.
When Lou Xiaoe comes back from Hong Kong, she is a Hong Kong businessman to everyone. The government will keep an eye on her. Do you think a silly Baitian can earn a family business in Hong Kong? You saw her investing in restaurants and giving all the profits to Widow Qin to run a nursing home. Do you know about her other businesses? Also, although Lou Qian was arrested, Lou Bancheng's IQ was not enough to hide the property in many places. As long as one place was not found, Lou Xiao'e would be short of money. Although the reputation of running a nursing home in the courtyard was gained by Widow Qin, but Lou Xiao'e's reputation in the government would be more favorable to her policies. In addition, what was the price of antiques in Hong Kong at that time and what was the price in the mainland? Lou Xiao'e's training from childhood to adulthood would not fail. How much does it cost to sell, so don't see her being sucked by blood? It depends on how much she gets through sucking blood. Also, if it wasn't for Sha Zhu's series of operations that could break off the father-son relationship with Sha Zhu, how much blood would Widow Qin suck through Sha Zhu in the later period? There is also repayment. If Sha Zhu hadn't found the big leader, Lou's father and Lou's mother couldn't escape. If the favor was repaid, would she lose if her son was sucked by blood?
Akainu went out and killed him.
I feel that most authors do this on purpose. If the protagonist is a decent character, he will be suppressed in every aspect. The villain protagonist will be upgraded normally. The supporting villain character can be the BOSS with any ability. The decent supporting character will either be the protagonist's pistachio or the scapegoat.
Author, why do you write so well?
Wow. . Don't get involved with Takasaka Kirino. I really hate Takasaka Kirino.
Uta is still in the East China Sea, and he can also be pulled on the boat
Did you copy the first three pictures directly from movies?
我就感觉你仿佛就是要主角死全家现在这个年代真的**这种卖惨,看小说就为了个心情舒畅你这样添堵谁舒服?你自己看都觉得不舒服吧,真的你这样写就是属于以前的写女主和主角感情多好然后女主死了的小说一样没啥看头啊,主角什么都改变不了不是废物是什么?
Are children better at writing than you? Can you be normal? Elder brother
Stop writing what nonsense your brother wrote.
Creampie for a lolita? I have a bold idea, let the lolita wear a vibrator and wear black stockings while coding? V? Hehe
What are the author's other books?
Before returning to the city at level 6, I wanted to ask Jace why he could kill a third of the prince.
This kind of book is the most hollow. You might as well say that you invented the earth's crust vibrator first. If you want the surface of any country to vibrate, you will just finish it. What kind of weapons do you need? The second one is the Star Destroyer Cannon. If anyone dares to kill you, the Star Destroyer Cannon will automatically attack the earth, committing suicide and destroying it without distinction.