Anime Crossover: Sacrificing the Red Dragon Emperor from the Start

When I saw the part about participating in the martial arts competition, the character of the protagonist was very strange. To put it harshly, he looked a bit like a white-eyed wolf. When they first arrived, he and Nayue were hunted down. Was it Sister Cangna who saved them and got them out of hiding? From the previous description, it seems that he has never bullied them, and his relationship with Na Yue is okay. And Sona is also asked to take care of the protagonist at school. As a result, the first thing the protagonist wanted to do when he gained strength was to teach others a lesson and to rise up and resist. I didn't say it couldn't be done. After all, Nayue's status was inferior to others no matter what, so it was normal for him to leave after becoming stronger. But after all, he saved your life in a crisis and was not kind to you. As a result, the narrator and the protagonist's confession made each other seem to force the protagonist to become a slave that month and bully them every day. Then Rias greeted the protagonist in a friendly manner when she awakened. She did not offend the protagonist. However, the protagonist pretended not to see it and thought that all demons looked the same. However, when he joined the school festival later, his face changed again.

It feels like a comprehensive comic with urban skin.

Let me talk about a few points. First of all, it is quite good that the author pays attention to book reviews and makes corrections in time. Secondly, the writing style needs to be improved and there is room for improvement. How can I put it that there is not much problem with the writing and description at present. However, there is a problem with the layout, the words are too dense. Then the author just took it for granted. He took too big a step in the beginning and incorporated too many world views. It feels like everything the author knows may have been integrated into it, right? The biggest fear of comprehensive comics is that too many worlds will be integrated into it, causing the plot to collapse, the characters to collapse, and the setting to collapse. Therefore, most comprehensive comics actually use the transition from daily life to combat, and they will not throw out too much information at once, but will release it little by little to avoid plot conflicts. There will be a bunch of bosses at the beginning. It can only be said that there is room for improvement

Has no one invented the Holy Light Missile? Such a big weakness...

I remember that the last time this book suddenly disappeared after a few pictures passed through the secret realm of Uruk, should it not happen this time?

Don't cut it off again or end up ghostwriting like the last book.

When writing about a world, write about it well. Do you have the writing power to combine the daily world with the mysterious world? Looks like a mess

Commentary on Chapter 2 Awakening of "Comprehensive Manga: Sacrifice to the Sekiryuutei at the Beginning" written by Iced Tea Lemon.

Why are there no pictures of female characters?

I have to say that your layout is really **, but the rest is fine. Can you change the layout?