Genshin Impact: My Past Life Is Revealed, I Acted in Toei Productions

The protagonist seems to be a weakling. In a ghost place like Teyvat, he should become more indifferent to protect himself. Otherwise, he will be like a yellow-haired camera who goes to various countries to be a tool, and then kicks him away after using it.

Those few sentences in the latest chapter really make me have high blood pressure for girls. What's wrong with girls? If you don't have the ability to do what you should do, it will put pressure on you. If you don't have the strength to perform the act of guardianship, it won't work, and crying and crying will not work. You will go through all kinds of hardships when you take the oath to protect others. This has nothing to do with men and women. I came up and said that I can't do this to the girl Balabala, I am the Lord. I'm so angry about the character. My teammates are not very good and I still get blamed for even a few words. If they are all beaten down, shouldn't the protagonist go up and take the life? You can write that you shouldn't talk about your teammates like this, but you have to point out the gender and directly change the meaning. Does it mean that women are weaker than men? Can women not be criticized and men can? This is not possible. People who bear the burden of guardianship do not distinguish between men and women. Suffering will not happen just because you are a woman.

Bushgomen, can you really make a living in Feilu with your coding speed?

It looked so awkward, and the main character seemed too familiar.

Kiana in your book looks so annoying

*, Write for a while, don't write for a while. It's so uncomfortable.

After that, you can also write about other teams that you are familiar with, such as Zyuden, Pirates, and the full-scale Botaro.

I really hate the feeling that the same person has several previous lives. It's too heroic.

Write some scenes of adding names at the beginning and the end, and keep the rest brief if you can, so as not to copy the entire story of True Swordsman! It's better to read the original work than to copy it all! (Just some people changed, right?) It's good that you wrote about the team in Feilu. After all, Feilu usually writes about the team that is included in the inventory and then led, individually (maybe there is, but I didn't see it), but it's easy to feel bad when you write like this! It's too watery. It's actually very simple and won't arouse too many people's objections. There are so many Sentai parts. If you write a few more, wouldn't you be able to write more water? But writing a real swordsman like you directly is only a few episodes short! I just removed the entire original work (just replaced some people), is it so cool? Water is fine! Is this past life you wrote about? You can definitely add more to other teams! Just set the protagonist to be reincarnated multiple times, or set it to be the guardian of the earth (so that every time you change to another team, you have the protagonist), wouldn't you be able to continue?

Author, how do you plan to write the story of the linkage between the True Swordsman and the Imperial Cavalry, as well as the 199 Heroes' Final Battle and the Super Hero War Chronicles? And when you write the plot of the past life, can you change their names to Mi Universe's names, and also change the plot a little bit, otherwise it will be really easy to get into trouble. Those who know it think you wrote Mi Universe's past life, and those who don't know think you wrote Mi Universe's Toei. In the end, can you write more about the plot between Crying and Taifu? I'm addicted to both of them.