Saint Seiya: I Picked up an Athena?

There are too many settings and too detailed to resemble a novel at all. The so-called plot is interaction. Whether it is with a woman or an enemy, in-depth communication is called a plot. As for the creative ability, please briefly focus on it. Even if you don't understand the principle, as long as you know how to use it, we will You are a reader, not a scholar, not to mention that you are creating in YY. You can't help but think about it. No matter how much you write, it is just water. Next, writing a comprehensive comic is very good, but people all enter the harem directly, and there is no need for communication. It is not called a plot if you go directly, let alone you dare to describe it in detail? It's probably just nonsense. After seeing that Nobachi is a talented person, it's still just bad.

The predecessor was framed and committed suicide. It's understandable that you've inherited a body and are hiding away in fear of retaliation, but the other party won't let you go. But after knowing the evil hand, you can still listen to the advice and not retaliate. Especially if you set the credibility in the previous article, you really will not retaliate. . . You are a saint. I don't know if you will retaliate later. I look aggrieved. Is this considered abuse? ? ? Anyway, Chapter 39, defeated. .

I can only say that anyone who writes this series has never seen the tokusatsu or other special featurettes, or the creative manuscript, and has reduced human creativity to nothing. I can only say that human beings in reality are super-bodied Lucy? Can it receive the amount of information in the universe? It is better to believe that these worlds are transformed by the thoughts of strong people at the realistic level. In reality, so many scientists do not know what is outside the real universe? Do you swear that the world is made up of you? It's better to believe it than to believe the infinite monkey one

The content that is not popular is not interesting at all.

I feel like I have read the first few chapters somewhere

I think you can write a few more chapters

Commentary on Chapter 28: The Treasure Map Incident, "Ke Xue: From Becoming Yuanzi Yunyang's Boyfriend" by Lao Zhenyi.

About Cyan Relic's "Saint Seiya: Did I Pick Up an Athena?" Chapter 8: The power of my thinking is activated, and I travel through the heavens and worlds with my hands. Chapter review of the [Tianmen] version.

Commentary on the chapters of "All People: Love Master, the Country Helps Me Train AI" written by the great beauty Sisi [35] Countries are eyeing it with eager eyes, and the strong ones in the void are dumbfounded (two chapters in one!).

In the next episode, the protagonist should do a billion push-ups.