
Anime Crossover: Saint Seiya, Did I Just Pick Up Athena?
综漫圣斗士:我捡了一只雅典娜?
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 189k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
72Chapters
1.3MReads
70kFlowers
9.4Score
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I saw a comment below saying that Saint Seiyas should not be given to everyday heroines. I agree very much. Saints are warriors, tearing the sky with their fists and cracking the earth with their feet. What do you mean by giving them to everyday heroines?
I was very speechless when I saw how the introduction looked so similar to a book I had read before, which also featured female protagonists from various daily comics as saints. From this introduction, it seems that Kasumigaoka Shiyu wants to be a Golden Saint? Seriously? The Saint's talent is not only spiritual, but also physical. For your setting, it is more recommended to collect some people with combat talents or special talents in daily comics. An example is Joel, the heroine in Spy House. There is a saying that the world limits you - you should look for people with this special talent. Kasumigaoka Shiha, I can't imagine becoming a saint at all, let alone a golden saint. Could it be that he uses black silk as a weapon. Each Golden Saint develops its own specialties on the basis of the pentagon. It does not mean that they are weak in any part. Their weakness is relative to their specialties. The foundation of the Saint Seiya is the tempered **. Or the author wouldn't think that Aries just puts up a crystal wall and activates telekinesis.
It's really outrageous. What kind of heroine is worthy of being a Saint? Can ordinary people in modern times endure the suffering of the Saints if they do not have a strong will? Except for a very few, most of them can't do it, and saints also need to be talented. Not only do they have to be strong-willed, they don't write passionate stories about fighting and about heroines, but they have to write about daily heroines.
Everyday heroines can wear holy clothes, but those who have strong fighting abilities, like Lala and Xiao An in Debao, must be strong in combat. Esdeath, who kills girls, cannot be used in Demon Slayer. Is old and fat Xia worthy of her? How many of them can she wear? Can she wear the golden holy clothes?
Don't be like accepting a lot of everyday female protagonists as your dependents. Except for a few exceptions, there are not so many potentials in daily life. For a god like the protagonist who can transcend all realms, just being a vase is enough. Accept everyday characters as your dependents and awaken. His talents are so much better than what characters he fights. This kind of plot is really meaningless. It is normal that the top geniuses from Feilu cannot compare with the cannon fodder of the universe. If that is really the case, it is better to recruit a few ants. The weaker the talent, the stronger. Wouldn't it be more cost-effective?
Change number and rewrite? , The one who inherited the underworld was also written by you, right?
Senior sister became a Saint. How many dishes did she drink like this? Let's not mention that the small universe is unique to Saint Seiya humans. Even if you look at what kind of training the young Seiya went through to become a bronze? Is she worthy of Kasumigaoka?
Uh, how should I put it? The writing style is not good, the protagonist is not good, the author is not good, the plot is not good as the description, what the fuck?
There are too many settings and too detailed to resemble a novel at all. The so-called plot is interaction. Whether it is with a woman or an enemy, in-depth communication is called a plot. As for the creative ability, please briefly focus on it. Even if you don't understand the principle, as long as you know how to use it, we will You are a reader, not a scholar, not to mention that you are creating in YY. You can't help but think about it. No matter how much you write, it is just water. Next, writing a comprehensive comic is very good, but people all enter the harem directly, and there is no need for communication. It is not called a plot if you go directly, let alone you dare to describe it in detail? It's probably just nonsense. After seeing that Nobachi is a talented person, it's still just bad.
Do you think we don't know each other anymore after you changed your phone number?