Honkai: Star Rail: Pink Demon Joins the Chat Group from the Start

It's not like I'm already a loser in real life, why would I still be a loser when reading a novel? The character of your protagonist is too bad, right?

The protagonist should be written as a tough character, similar to Wang Xiaoming's later character or Tiandao. If he can take action against the enemy, he won't say much and will only say a couple of slutty words. He will be gentler towards people he recognizes. And don't give the protagonist any crazy words, such as calling him Kafka's mother. To be honest. Whether it's in a game or in reality, I'm quite disgusted when I see this. It's like a psychopath. Since it's wrapped in the box of Imperial Cavalry World Destroyer, don't go into it. I don't have much to say about the rest. I've also read a book like this, Imperial Cavalry and Bent Iron, but it seems like a eunuch. Please write it carefully.

Walter's is not a black hole. You don't really think of a pseudo-black hole as a black hole, do you?

What if you can't write a book without playing with abstractions? Why do you call everyone mom when you meet them in the beginning? I'm speechless. Anyone can be your mom.

After reading less than ten chapters, I always felt that the protagonist was riding God's horse, which was awkward to watch. As for the character of the protagonist, you feel better about Kaiwu or Denou. But, I feel like it's not popular in Feilu. I'll take a look at it before talking about it.

I feel like the author needs to revise the early plot, change the character of the protagonist, speed up the pace a little, and polish the writing. This theme and idea will become popular in Feilu. I thought about it, and the biggest problem was the plot at the beginning. The character and behavior of the protagonist made me lose the desire to read further. It was quite interesting to read the latest chapter, but the previous chapter was too confusing, which made me not want to read the book. I have been reading Fei Lu for almost ten years, and I really feel that the subject matter is quite good. I just feel that this book would be better if it were taken elsewhere, or the plot could be revised to be more in line with Fei Lu. But if it really fits the character of the protagonist, all the other knights, except for the Shiwang Emperor Qi, are not very popular. Really, the protagonist's personality is so different from that of Emperor Qi, no matter how you look at it, it's uncomfortable. I finally understand the feeling of having a genius in a sect and then practicing evil ways. I really like this idea. Please don't blame me for complaining a lot. I am ** this book. If the author writes a new book, remember to kick me.

That's magenta magenta! Don't you know how to distinguish colors?

I always feel that Kafka is not like the person who blushes when he calls mom in the first picture

I thought it was the pink devil who eats everything. . The result is this, isn't this magenta?

Genshin Impact isn't a cool plot where everyone complains about the protagonist falling asleep, but you, the protagonist of a cool plot, get knocked unconscious at the beginning?