Fairy, Please Spare Me. I Really Didn't Mean to Pretend to Be Your Husband

I just started with a prop, and then I integrated the mask flow and the clone flow, hahahahahahaha, plus pretending to be a pig, I am invincible, brother, I will see what happens next

I have read more than 200 chapters, and the plot is barely okay. It is worth reading, but there are too many characters and the stalls are too big and scattered here and there. In addition, I realized some things. The male protagonist always uses the bearded disguise and the identity of Li to make friends with women? Sleeping with different heroines? The same goes for the Hermitage Castle, where the heroine sleeps with her Russian identity and her Russian face? You have to explain this carefully, otherwise it will be very jarring. Also, your idea is very problematic. Shouldn't the post station be a transit station for people coming and going? Why did you just write it as base camp? Three more small villages were created. It was so chaotic that I felt a little tired. It's better to set up a base camp directly and put all the good things in the base camp, otherwise it will be a headache and annoying to look at them all here and there.

After watching the beginning, I don't want to go back to the protagonist's beginning. Isn't it too cowardly? You know that the beauty's background is not simple, but you still provoke the toad and want to eat the swan meat.

Feilu has too much mental mysophobia. They can't accept your stealing other people's women.

I came in based on the title, but what I wrote in front of it didn't match the title, making it feel like it was a lord struggle article. However, the world view was quite grand and the description felt good, so I continued reading. As a result, I ended up getting back to the title a bit as I wrote it. It's not that this won't work, but I just wanted to read it seriously and became a little brainless to accept the harem. It doesn't matter if you wrote it like this from the beginning. It feels like the protagonists in the real world have only known each other for a few days and don't understand them, so they fall in love with them out of nowhere. Well, it's just that there's too little written about it. I didn't write anything about the background. It's just pretty and it's pretty. Although you may be scolded if you write too much. In Tianyuan World, mask clones are not considered poisonous. The main body of Tianyuan World also explained that they can still accept it, just use another appearance simulated by the mask to remove the forehead. Later, I patched it up and said I wanted to show them the real appearance.

Chapter 400 and Chapter 404 are two more poisonous points. The inviter's partner wanted to kill you and seize the treasure, and in front of the inviter, you showed your identity and was saved by others, and then you continued to cooperate like a normal person? It's not like you need this cooperation so much that you have to go. I'm sure I'll kill him later, but it's really uncomfortable here. You can definitely go back and bring someone to kill him, or that's what normal logic must think, instead of writing a novel so that you can arrange to kill him by stumbling during the cooperation process, and you will definitely kill him instead of being killed by someone with the highest level of cultivation. There is a woman in the back who can no longer survive with her power and joins you. Although you will need to build such a power in the future, on the surface you do not need it. Then the woman comes and says: I can devote myself to you, and you will agree. The protagonist is just a person whose lower body controls the upper body, and let the woman push her nose and face. It's good to open a harem, but your writing can also be regarded as a lord story. The lord of a power is just a piece of shit... I just hired two people who are raising children and have trouble behind them. Opening a harem also has quality points. It's OK without help, but don't hold back. It's not that people are bad, but you just said there would be trouble and you didn't want to accept it, and then you couldn't help but accept it...

The world view is grand, the setting is rich, the characters have distinctive personalities, and most importantly, it is an original work! It is a rare work in a certain Luzhong. As long as you keep updating it, all the tickets will be given to you.

To be honest, the huge world view and the extraordinary system setting, I can give it an 8 points, but the protagonist's personality is generally not lovable. The brainless stallion licks without any lower limit. As long as he likes the woman, he will quickly arrange a high position and give benefits. The key is that in reality, there are more than a dozen Tianyuan women, too many. For me, the perception is poor, and the future dream for thousands of years. The protagonist will still be like this bird. Let's talk about it. The development of the main character's territorial station is too slow. There are hundreds of pictures. I still have this wretched development. I pretended to be a pig too many times and really turned into a pig. There are many rare treasures and resources worth hundreds of millions of gold coins. There are also a lot of awesome clones, but they are just hidden. I don't need a few hundred. The cool point is almost not kept. The only thing that attracts me now is the setting. The cool point of knowing the future is gone. Come on, author.

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the little praise starts to sound, and the number of dead harvests starts to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are 20 years old, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates.

I really like this genre. The world is grand, the descriptions are delicate, and the scenes are lifelike. I couldn't stop reading it. I just hope the pace is faster, otherwise I really need to be more patient to savor the taste. It's been a long time since I've encountered a book like this that can be rated 10 points. The author must continue to update it. I will follow it and give my full support.