Outside: the Beginning Almost Ended

没有卫星，知道什么叫移动式便携性发射的神舟十一号吗？用的东风底盘哦，相当于把洲际导弹换成神舟十一号运载火箭，可以随时补发卫星，你细品，还没有卫星，你觉得国家和作者你一样纯吗？不过也不怪作者，毕竟大多数人对现代武器和科技装备有多恐怖并没有一个清晰的概念，毕竟大多数人对战争映像都还在二战，海碗战争又是一次刷新，但现在又不一样了，所以作者写的漏洞很大，bug很多，初心是好的，但把国家写反应太慢了，完全不知道一个现代化工业强国有多恐怖。

看了三张尴尬的要死。。啥本事还没有就本座。。座个屁。

在奥特、假面骑士、铠甲勇士、游戏王等世界到处直播

简直傻得一批 完完全全的法盲 暴发户 还撒钱 一袋子一袋子的装 你写这些能否百度一下中国法律不？ 你敢大片撒钱 烧钱 最少蹲三年

别有女主了，写什么爱情，写友情，兄弟情不好嘛？任婷婷别收，几乎这类文都写她，让男主安安心心的搞事业，最后说不定再回去也行

Thousands of people don't have ID cards. That's awesome.

In addition, the movie version of Jean Gray does not conform to Asian aesthetic standards. At least I don't think she is beautiful. A standard European and American big girl.

明日香怎么说都是后宫一员尽量呆在身边吧……出场太少了啊

男主正常，系统的强化系统只能强化物品

The protagonist is so strong, look at it! Also teleporting, Black Emperor: Beat*Ma! Damn, look at the protagonist doing whatever he wants, I want to hit him. The protagonist is too smooth, too smooth. Why doesn't the protagonist just fight Black Emperor and use teleportation from behind to steal the Magic Poster? Why doesn't he teleport to the Kaioh to kill him? Because the main character just plays. Protagonist: Just come and play, come and hit me, This book was okay at first, but later on the main character was too much to beat up and it wasn't very interesting.

The heroine is not Shao Anna, why is she replaced by Wan Ling? What the hell?

Very good, very good, but too slow! It's rare to see one!

That's a good idea. Come on, I've got all the flowers for you.

It's very well written, but updates are too slow.

我就问一下系统给你个神级编程第二天就说系统出来？？？

Regarding Lao Siji's book "Supernatural Website Exposed, Is the IP Address in the Underworld?" Chapter 12 Another reminder comes with double clicks! Chapter review.

Come on, I haven't seen any books about peacock feathers.

I thought the protagonist was a time traveler

最新几章简直离谱，从动漫到哲学再到不可描述的东西

Author, have you ever looked up the information about the version of "You Like It" that seems to be a costume drama? It was written in the middle of the Ming Dynasty, and they traveled directly to modern times.

About Shui Diandianduo's book "Hong Kong Island, the Rebirth of the Zaibatsu, and the Beginning of the Founding of the Pacific" Chapter 54 Return to Toshima! Chapter review.

** Can you write more discerningly about other people? His aunt is too weak.

Review of Chapter 27, Xiguan House, written about the helpless world of "Outer: The Beginning Almost Ended".

About the helpless world, "Outside: The Beginning Almost Ended" Chapter 12: First Class Merit Plaque Chapter Commentary.

About Wang Xiangwang's "Complex: Monster No. 8?" Man of Steel, Boy" Chapter 21: Qian Shu and Mina-chan Tie Tie [Newbie on the road, please support! ! ! ] Chapter review.

Commentary on the initial chapter of Chapter 1 of "Outer: The Beginning Almost Ended" written about the helpless world.

关于山间一老翁所著《天呐！我的契灵竟然是个粉嫩萝莉》 第十一章给我射他 章节点评。

Chapter 026: Inventory! About "Voyage: Honeymoon Tour Group, Stickers Make You Strong" written by Angry Chengzi! Which fruit ability should I choose next? Chapter review.

Commentary on Chapter 13 of "Ultra: The Strongest Leonix" written by Big Bone Soup: King Red Joins the War.

关于豹子头老贼所著《僵尸：重生僵尸，在樱花国杀疯了》 03 、吸食人血，晋级黑僵 章节点评。