Daqing: People Are in the Supervisory Yuan, Killing People and Asking for Immortality

I'm terminally ill. I'm foaming at the mouth every day. I'm in a daze and my legs are weak. The doctor asked me to come here to find a handsome guy who reads every day. He said he has the address of a hospital that can cure me. Please save the child. Www()com

After reading the introduction, I feel that the author has a trick in his head and relies on his words without any documents. Could this be the legendary King of Strong Mouth?

The first two talents are temporary upgrades. I feel that they are purely used to explode seeds at critical moments. Those treasure chests are of no use. The breathing method of the god-level treasure chest is outrageous, and there is not even the Breath of the Sun. Can you get five figures by opening 100 god-level treasure chests? If there is no explosion, the protagonist's strength will basically be perfectly integrated into the supporting role. I feel that the pressure of the battle is too much. It has been more than 50 chapters, and they are still fighting each other, and then they will explode as soon as the key battle comes. Every time I change the writing, it is the same. Hurry up and strengthen the protagonist, at least to create a gap with the supporting role. This system basically has no effect. It is not a golden finger at all, it is only a buff level at most. But the plot is quite good. Although I can't say there are no problems, at least it can be seen that it has been thought about seriously. Come on.

一发攻击水一天内心戏，你也是够可以的，就不能精炼点么，用内心戏水数学，这种写法真的有点**

Speechless, the academy may be very strong in the lower world, but you said it yourself. The Qin Dynasty is a dynasty that has existed for thousands of years. A dynasty that has existed for thousands of years provoked the Academy and refused to destroy it directly and negotiated conditions. Moreover, he does everything by himself and still acts like a shitty emperor. He can only hook up as a thug. He has to do it by himself anyway. If you are qualified, you will know how awesome he is as a master by looking at his thugs.

Do you dare to write a plot with a female protagonist? It's hilarious. Only men are involved in the group, right? When a woman meets someone who is handsome, rich and considerate, see if you can hold on. Aren't you afraid that the failed man will sue or take revenge directly? Moreover, the male protagonist has a mobile phone, and I saw it as soon as I searched for this show. Why should I act as a clown to show to others? It is directly illegal from a legal perspective. I can also break up my new girlfriend. Why should I keep it? There are a lot of people who are better and more outstanding than her. Let's just become monks.

It would be better if you summoned the hero directly, but the whole hero template of a male is still dressed as a woman,**

Finally back again, welcome back

Isn't Leo from the red race? And does it have less energy than Ultraman from the Land of Light? It is said that Ultraman Leo can only move for two minutes and forty seconds on the earth. As Leo's younger brother, how can the protagonist get so much energy to release light?

How to put it, emmm, what you write is more like a game than a real world. Restarting the prosthetic eye and so on are all skills of hackers. The word skill should not be used in the real world. You can just say h "restarted his prosthetic eye". This may still have a sense of reality. Everything you write is a skill. It really gives me the feeling that game hackers are skills, not skills. Restarting the prosthetic eye and everything should be technology, not skills.

Normal people don't react like this. You are out of the atmosphere.

Accept Grayfia? Just the silver-haired Queen of Annihilation. Just change the plot.

It would be nice if there was less proportion of personal attributes and skills layout! Every time I have an attribute point and upgrade it, I write this in half the space. Can it be simplified? For example, upgrade something or other, and other things are blocked.

The writing is pretty good, but you should read it yourself after writing. Typos really affect the perception.

The devil spider is not that big. The mother is only two or three meters tall. How can the offspring be 20 meters tall?

Another protagonist who wants to be an emperor

I hope you can get more sugar and don't have a knife

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