Building an Immortal Academy in Teyvat: From the Start, I Teach Shenhe Dual Cultivation

I don't want to read it when I see the author writing Baizhu like this. How bad would a person who is willing to spend his life to save others be? Besides, Baizhu's research on immortality is not for himself, but in the hope of benefiting more people.

I feel that the author's character design of Ning Guang is a bit biased. There are fools in Teyvat who are causing trouble everywhere, and there is an abyss outside looking at him. Liyue Qixing is actually worried that its people are too powerful and difficult to control. It is possible that the pattern of the Engravers is relatively small, and Ningguang's ambition will not make him so short-sighted.

The author's writing is okay, but the writing about Baizhu and Hutao is wrong. Hutao writes that he bullies ordinary people in the wild to achieve his goals, while Baizhu writes that he will do whatever it takes to get the elixir.

Let's not talk about the character issues. The plot is too weak. It's over 50 chapters and I haven't even finished the academy yet. It's so slow to build an academy. I guess I've only just found the staff by the time it's released. It may not be finished. I haven't seen the author reply to comments.

Ningguang's ambition is quite different from her strength... She is so brave...

It was okay in the beginning, but not so good after chapter 30

It's very beautiful, why is there no one there?

It's too watery. There are so many chapters and I haven't gotten to the point yet.

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