Film and TV: A Gastly Nest from the Start

It seems like you wrote this book as a hegemony article. But what do you mean, the boss, running around?

Before Lin Miaomiao came, it was still a 9.8 Score. After Lin Miaomiao came, it was a 7.5 Score. Author, please think carefully about how to change it to improve the score.

I don't understand why I thought of adding Lin Miaomiao, a modern school drama time traveler! I really can't understand!

My rating is 7.5. How many comments did the author have to delete to look so harmonious?

Emmm After raising it for a few days, I started to want to see it for fun, but I saw Lin Miaomiao. . . This thing is too poisonous. Get rid of it as soon as possible! Even if you have a harem, it's still better than this guy! And you didn't arrange any hardships for this girl, you just met the protagonist and asked questions straight away without any sense of distance!

You have too many nonsense adjectives. Where are you writing your essay?

Zhao Jinmai has so many roles, isn't Li Shiqing good? Isn't the Yin fruit fragrant? Isn't it enough that I have to write about Lin Miaomiao←_←The losses suffered in the previous book? Also, your three consecutive books are all a hodgepodge, with no major points covered, and some details are very watery. The first one was mainly too complicated and messy, and the second one was due to the presence of my sister and Lin Miao Miao Dan. As a result, this book made the same mistake again. Is it necessary to write about the dispute between my sister and Lin Miaomiao? ←_← You have already written the third book, so your writing skills have improved a bit. I am very happy to see you writing a new book. I clicked in and found out that there are younger sisters and Lin Miaomiao. Even if you like Zhao Jinmai, you don't have to have Lin Miaomiao. Also improve your hodgepodge problem.

Update faster!! Too slow!!

Here comes another time traveler. MD wants to refund his money.

See it as the beginning of the explosion of the ghost's lair