Pokemon: Born Already at the Finish Line for Countless People!

The protagonist's mother's plot that favors the heroine is very unfriendly to those who bring the protagonist's perspective. Judging from the description, the heroine should often be at the protagonist's house, and the protagonist is already accustomed to this kind of favoritism towards his mother and summed up his experience. It's better to have less of this kind of plot later on.

The male protagonist's mother and the female protagonist are not lovable, and the female protagonist calls the male protagonist like a eunuch. The male protagonist is actually afraid of the female protagonist and the Shura Field, and is on the weak side. At present, these are the poisonous points that make me unhappy.

Why do the protagonists' families in most novels nowadays start to treat outsiders women as more dear to them than their own biological sons?

A very flamboyant male protagonist, this kind of old-fashioned male protagonist with strict wife control and soft-footed shrimp can still appear in Feilu

After evolving to Duolongqi, your strength is at its peak? Are you sure you've played it? Already over half level and still only ordinary?

As far as the male character in this book is concerned, whenever a woman offers a cup of poison for a man to drink, he doesn't dare to resist and the poison kills him. I just read the comment section and only read the second chapter. It's really poisonous. The woman has trained the man to be a bitch, and he still doesn't dare to resist being fed. I treat him as your female horse's pet!!! Hahaha

I don't know what the author thinks it would be like for your girlfriend to call you TJ in reality, and I don't know if the author's real-life girlfriend would immediately donate money to buy her jewelry or something if she was tougher. I don't know if the author would feel intimidated when his girlfriend stares at you. In my opinion, the woman in this book is a complete failure. She always highlights how powerful the protagonist's family is, and what the protagonist's relationship is with Dialga. There was a lot of support in school, but he lost the battle against his girlfriend. As expected, both of them are quasi-kings. It has to be said that it is rare for the protagonist of the same realm to be subdued and smile bitterly. Love is mutual, and yandere is possessive. If the heroine is a yandere, she does not give the protagonist any face outside or at home. It feels like she is not a yandere but a coward. I can only see how humble the protagonist is in this relationship, but not how much the heroine loves the protagonist.

Descendants of the Yandi Shennong clan should use fire, wood or poison. The inheritance elves should be wind speed dogs or fire moths. How could they be steel dragons?

I have been reading book reviews recently and saw the feedback from several readers. Based on the feedback, I will briefly revise it today. Regarding the settings of the heroine and the protagonist's mother, we will also modify them later without affecting them, so that the protagonist is no longer on the weak side. Another point, if you think there are any shortcomings in this book, you can point it out, and I will modify it as long as it makes sense. This is not the first time I write about elves. I have completed one before, so as long as you enjoy it, this book will not be eunuch**

You went to the ancestral land and did nothing to give others a quasi-god. Why don't you accept one?