
Three Kingdoms: From the Start, I Swore Brotherhood in the Peach Garden and Merged with Li Yuanba
三国:开局桃园结义,融合李元霸
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 327k Words
- Genre
- Military & History
- Subgenre
- Three Kingdoms Saga
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
97Chapters
2.4MReads
21.8kFlowers
9.5Score
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Reader comments 50
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If the protagonist is very capable but still hides it, and only exposes it after it is published, it means you are pretending to be a slap in the face, and you are setting it up in vain. You will see the devil if your writing lasts long.
After reading Chapter 33, I would like to briefly describe my feelings. The protagonist is a refugee at the beginning, and after getting the system, he has been down and out and met the three brothers, so the time point is actually after the Yellow Turban. Although the protagonist begins to be positioned as a resourceful person within the group, his expressiveness is not very strong. This may be due to the writing style, and the words and sentences are relatively clear. The performance of the protagonist in the early stage is, well, it is difficult to describe, at least I can't imagine the main character. The scene where Kaku runs out of the camp with his legs, comes to the battlefield, throws the millstone, and then collides with the red rabbit's horse hooves with his bony fists. Although some people may think this kind of One Punch Man plot is very cool, but to be honest, I personally feel that it is quite unqualified. Other time travelers in this scene usually have the reputation of White Horse General, Flying General, etc. As for the protagonist, uh, he is still losing weight. Come on, I hope I can write better.
It's okay to be Liu Bei's younger brother/thug. Although I don't like Liu Bei very much, I don't deny his ability and personality charm. But don't follow Liu Bei's old path just for the sake of word count. Why take so many detours? Strive to end the civil strife as soon as possible, and the external war is not limited to the number of words. Isn't the achievement of Hua, the Sun Never Sets, and the Xia Empire fragrant? The system rewards a small amount of Lu, which is enough to increase the population.
Isn't it possible that someone from the Three Kingdoms could defeat someone with ten thousand kilograms of force? If it weren't for a protagonist like Dynasty Warriors, he would be invincible
No, it doesn't combine with Li Yuanba's IQ, it's not interesting.
Don't make any drama about bitterness and hatred in Feilu. This is Shuangwen's territory. If you are strong enough and powerful enough, you can rob it and it's over. What the hell are you doing with Diao Chan, your childhood sweetheart and then being separated by Wang Yun, and you also arranged for the identity of the protagonist to be a commoner.
Water, and the weapon has to be a hammer. I don't think he gained Li Yuanba's power, but was taken away by Li Yuanba.
I thought I was getting everything from Li Yuanba directly
You are 181cm tall and 90kg in weight. You are a monkey.
It's okay, but the task of losing one pound of weight is simply incomprehensible. If you want to create an image that others don't recognize beauty in front of the protagonist, you don't have to make the protagonist look like a bamboo pole. If you want to write about the contrast between the protagonist's strength and appearance, it's too hard to tell the truth. It's not necessary at all. If you want, just write about the main character who was raised by Liu Guan and Zhang during the period of the 18th princes, so that others are shocked. It looks better than you who are dying and have to lose weight. It is simple and refreshing, but you still want to find another way. Maybe the author thinks it is good, but I just feel that it is inexplicable.