
Thunderbolt Hero Shadow: the World of Shepherds!
霹雳侠影之牧神天下!
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- Ongoing
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- 729k Words
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- Fanfiction
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- Anime Fanfiction
- Audience
- For men
- Updated
- 8mo ago
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- Faloo
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It makes me think that if I were the protagonist, I would immediately destroy the world. The whole country has been mocking the protagonist. The protagonist doesn't care about anything. He even licks his face to help earn rewards for those who scold the protagonist. Do you like to be scolded?
Can the plot pace be faster? The relationship between the protagonist and the heroines is a bit slow to advance. In addition to the protagonist's prehistoric genes, in addition to Pangu, the protagonist should also get the genes of characters from the prehistoric period such as the Sanqing, the Demon Emperor, and the Twelve Ancestral Witches in the later period, right? Although they are not as good as Pangu in the prehistoric setting, they are also very powerful. Not only do they have different magical weapons, but each of them is proficient in the power of different laws. Like time and space, metal, wood, water, fire and earth, the law of force and so on. There are even more weapons, including God-killing, Immortal-killing Sword Formation, Five Directions Flag... Etc. There are also the genes of the four great mythical beasts, the four great ferocious beasts, the flying unicorn, and the five prehistoric insects. These alien beast genes are not used by the protagonist. They can be transplanted into animals on the earth, or the system can simply summon these alien beasts. These mythical beasts are pretty cool as pets, aren't they?
According to the author's setting, wouldn't the protagonist always have to play female roles in the future?
Although I know that Katakuri has the overlord color, it is natural to use it to clear soldiers, but it always feels a bit boring to use it so often to clear a few soldiers. It would be nice if he could use the skill of armed-color jelly beans to hit people more often.
Suddenly writing about a female teacher with the surname Lan is a completely brainless author. I guess the author deliberately **
Even if I want to invite Feng Zhihen for a page of a book, I have to come to the door to say the invitation in person. Su Huanzhen had done something wrong on her own, and it was impossible for Ao Xiao Hongchen or even Feng Zhihen to come forward. I really feel like I'm a bit overwhelmed. The righteous path of suffering continues like this. The protagonist simply goes to the Black Sea Forest Prison to cooperate to destroy Zhengdaosu, and they can really do it together! !
It's better to add some Marvel or DC extra-cosmic abilities. They are abilities, not living beings. Izayoi has a star particle bug, so I can create my own ability.
我在现实中,自卑懦弱,不敢和任何人发生冲突,也不敢侮辱别人,生怕被人殴打。但是在网络中…本尊!意气风发!睥睨天下!辱骂网友,唯我独尊!天不生我键盘侠,喷道万古长如夜,键来!仙之颠,傲世间!有我键盘就有天!大河之键天上来!一键横天镇世间!破红尘!杀尽仙!一键在手斩九天!倘若世间无真仙?我愿持键化为仙!
No updates for two days, eunuch
Let's use the idiom of grafting flowers and imitating trees. Can we absorb other people's skills and transfer them to subordinates, thereby improving their subordinates' strength?
To be honest, I personally feel that Su is so hypocritical. Every time he says it is for the sake of all the people in the world, and then when he is needed, he has no idea where he went.
Take a look at the source of the skills practiced by the protagonist. Please read the original work and don't show your ignorance here. The author also wrote about the origin of the protagonist's practice. Saint Seiya's small universe can punch billions of punches per second and smash atoms. I didn't see you spraying it. I can't do martial arts? If you don't have knowledge, don't let BB lie around.
The Three Vehicles of Xuanhuang should be at the level of a one-page book. Now that the protagonist has the indestructibility of the King Kong, and the endless flow, he can fight a protracted war, and he can definitely take down the Six Kings of Kaitian. There are also the Nine Wheels of Heaven, Youdu, the World of Elves, the Eight Tribes of Heaven and Evil, etc. He can definitely grab them and refine them in an instant, becoming a near-god. With the indestructibility of the golden light, he is the second to the Demon Buddha.
When will Carmilla show up?
Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this! Let's talk about it, we have the potential to become a big hit ~ keep at it! Come on come on!
To be honest, although I think One Piece is not very good, what you wrote is not clever at all. Let's not talk about the customs in Japan. Just saying that it is normal behavior to be peeped in the shower in One Piece. Sanji seems to be someone's dream, and it seems that it is voyeurism, and I remember that there are many voyeuristic clips in the original novel.
Can't stand the repetition of chapter names**
Chapter 23: 30,000 minus 28,060 equals 1,600? Bullying me for not being good at math!
Why add so much "hard work" that has no effect?
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This picture is of Wuming Road. Still Killua
Come on, the writing is good. It's great to make some changes according to the plot. If it's not completely original, why would you write a fanfic?
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Let me know from the author whether this book will be republished. I have read a beginning similar to this one.
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The rest is okay, mainly because who can't fly? →_→