Honkai: Star Rail: Fan-Made Iconic Scenes, Tingyun's Home Gets Raided from the Start

I want to write this kind of second-generation article well. Or no pig's feet. Or write the protagonist into a second creation and be created. Or just create the protagonist together with the characters in the game. It's like you who wrote the protagonist but then pushed the protagonist to the foreground. Isn't it to make people angry? I can't understand this setting at all. Isn't this a poisonous point?

Trail Blazers are Trail Blazers, stars are Stars, Trail Blazers. What the hell are Stars? It's very interesting, okay? "Trailblazers. Stars are grateful", "Trailblazers. Stars are grateful", "Trailblazers. Stars are awakened by water", what are you writing? Isn't it embarrassing to read it yourself?

I want to scold you, but I don't know how. Because of your writing style of starting with one or two words and turning it into a paragraph, I feel that I and the big-breasted guys who read this book are insulted. A literal cesspit.

Can you understand what you write?

I really don't understand how this kind of inventory article can make the protagonist stand up. Isn't it just to make the other party angry? It feels like it has no meaning at all, just like a fool.

Man, in the first chapter, Cocolia becomes Kakalia. There is a problem in the first chapter. Isn't it a bit too much?

Nuozhi, what you wrote is really messy.

The writing is very confusing, not to mention the content, but the writing skills are too poor. The novel is to describe the picture in the mind, so that the reader can also have a general picture in the mind. This book is obviously a "drama" that the author made up in his head, but he doesn't know how to describe it. It's a hammer here and there, and the dialogue is very incomprehensible. It can't even be regarded as a passing "look at the pictures and talk". It is recommended to sediment again.

Author, I understand exactly what you want to express! You can't write outside the collapse of iron! When some things that are not from Beng Tie appear in Beng Tie, there will be a strong sense of separatism. In reality, some of the jokes that cannot appear in Beng Tie will give rise to a sense of separatism as soon as they appear! That's why some people say your novels are messy! It's not chaos! The sense of separatism is too strong!

Standard Lu level logic level