Rebirth of Xu Xian, Plundering Entries and Flooding Lingshan Mountain

Can you advance the plot and stop living a boring routine? As a genius club, you should do some genius things. This is breeding, not intelligence. . . .

吗的，杀2个人还搞得这么复杂，要民心干嘛，自己拍死就行，只要你够强，谁敢说，SB吧，还要民心，要个逼啊，主世界有没有仙都是个问题，靠，

Body 255 Kakashi? Then why don't you just push the Hokage with your physical body?

Sure enough, I knew why I didn't follow the trend, why didn't I come out? Apart from the fact that the names are almost identical, I was not disappointed.

Do you write female videos? The handyman disciple questioned the elder, and the elder gave the handyman disciple proof? This inappropriate female channel framed Yuanying, and Yuanying deposed himself and cultivated himself to prove his innocence?

And because the heroine wants to get close to the protagonist, she causes trouble for the protagonist when the information is not equal. Writing like this makes the heroine look bad and makes her unlikable... Many books rely on the heroine to cause trouble to advance the plot. Even if this is the case, don't write it so rigidly.

I feel like I'm heading in the direction of licking

I hope there will be no compromise later. After repelling the polar bear, if Zhang Xueliu dares to come, I hope to kill him directly; don't talk about any ridiculous family ties with General Zhenbei anymore. Well, you only have interests from the beginning to the end and no family ties at all. You were scared to death since you were little. Did he help you at all? And it can definitely be said that you were raised by your mother. Wouldn't it be better to counterattack Polar Bear, capture Beihai Province, take back my mother, and confront General Zhenbei? Zhang Xueliu colluded with foreign brothers to kill each other, and what he wanted was to sacrifice you. I only feel ** for the land obtained through charity. We are here to see Shuangwen, not beggars and cowards! ! !

An urban novel about cultivating immortality

What are you writing about? The title is completely different from the content. Let's find a class

Wang Baochuan waited for Xue Pinggui in Hanyao for 18 years and became queen for 18 days.

Devil's High School must be written

Just water for you. The Red Army in the prehistoric novels talked about the treasures they only had. Hey, you didn't even talk about this. Damn it, how come you have it? Otherwise, don't write it and just preach this one.

I read the reviews and didn't believe it, but after reading it myself I found out that it was indeed the case. The author's ability to grasp the rhythm is too poor, or he is just naive, I'm not sure which one it is. But I also read Chapter 20, and then I was confused. From Chapter 13 to Chapter 20, it was just a private written test for elixirs. It is too long-winded to reflect the protagonist's intelligence or skills. I didn't want to read any of those conversations, and it took me 30 seconds to flip from chapter 13 to chapter 20. So what's the point of writing so much? I didn't know how to read it at all, so I stopped reading when I reached chapter 20, because after reading this, I had already sentenced this book to death. I'm not sure whether this book is slow to pick up due to the author's poor grasp of pacing, or whether the author is really trying to stay in the water.

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The writing system is too mentally retarded. People who haven't read it don't know what it is about.

I don't like Shen Qiong very much, and I hope someone else will write it.

The author is about to raise his butt, I want to know the man and have sex with him. . .

The plot is so advanced, how to fight the Universal Conference?

I watched it when I was a kid, but I vaguely remember that Taiyi's first rolling ball beast seemed a bit big.

Your writing style is really not that good, there are many details that are wrong.

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