Anime Crossover Chat Group: Leading Gensokyo's Entire Sect to Ascend

If Gensokyo is written well, many people will be willing to pay for it, but if you write like this, who is willing to pay for it? There are several female protagonists appearing in any chapter, one after another, without even interacting with Gensokyo. I saw Chapter 27, and I roughly estimate that there are dozens of female protagonists. There's no story line at all, it's all about the whole story.

The writing of Shura Field is really bad. It gives people the impression that they are obviously very awesome, but they are just like a coward.

It's too messy and confusing to look at, and the protagonist has lived in vain for so many years, and he's still afraid that even his own woman can't handle it? You wilt after being flirted with by a woman. If you were a pure virgin, I wouldn't say anything, but you write about old things from ancient times to the present, and this is the result?

To be honest, I don't really like this kind of YY writing, it's too confusing and too deliberate. You can pass the time and have a look.

It's all astringent. I suspect that the author has no main line or outline. He just writes wherever he thinks.

The author is a good author and knows how to avoid lightning. I suspect that the author has been in Y bar, but his writing is a bit dull. I suggest that if you are invincible, write more about daily life.

I suddenly wanted to say that the author would not have written about Liu Bei before, right?

Author, you can make a certain Lu writer cuckold Lillie come out, that's awesome too

The original Shenron of Gensokyo, let me do the math, I remember it seemed like it exploded from star to star

Reading a book requires a transition. When I read Liu Bei in the past, the plot descriptions were very detailed. Nine and a half of the ten chapters were devoted to describing the battle plot. But after reading ten chapters, I started looking for the main story line. After reading ten chapters of the normal text, I started to look for window scenes to describe. You can't write too much about anything.