
Comprehensive Comic: Gene Lock at the Beginning, Traveling Through the World
综漫:开局基因锁,穿梭世界
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- 504k Words
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- Fanfiction
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- Anime Fanfiction
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- For men
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I finally understand what the biggest problem with this book is. The author lacks a statement in the first chapter that the protagonist has traveled to an infinite and terrifying world view that does not exist in the original plot, in order to confirm the orthodox nobility and inviolability of the gene lock. If you say this is Z-style infinite from the beginning, then other extraordinary powers except for gene locks are crooked ways, and all extraordinary abilities are branches of gene locks. This makes sense logically, and the protagonist has the confidence to make this judgment on his own. Instead of like now, no matter how you look at it, you will just feel that the author is using Gene Lock to compete with other extraordinary powers. It is obvious that Hokage can cut the moon in the later stage, but he has to compare the strength with the third-level Gene Lock against legion-level weaklings. Even if you reach the fourth level, you still have to catch up in the middle and late stages. The problem now is that there is no logical reasoning to support why the gene lock is correct. The protagonist is just imagining his own future and looking down on other extraordinary people.
Two meters and a half is too tall. To be honest in the world of comics, I feel that even 1.9 Meters is a bit tall. I think the author should quickly change the height of the protagonist to a normal height, otherwise it will look weird. If it is not changed, I will have no choice but to give up and continue pursuing it.
After reading the introduction, does Yinglili have to force herself to have the blood of King Arthur? I really can't find any similarities except that the square x is the same.
The writing style looks like that of an old author, but the ones he chooses are too classic for this world. It would be enough to have one such as Full-time Dead Fire Sea. Fei Lu writes too many of these, and it's already boring to read.
Why should we explain this common sense issue? Isn't it common sense that power is still common sense in other worlds? Power is an inherent thing. It is the protagonist's own power, and it is not a rule. No matter how many world powers are replaced, it will not disappear. However, differences in some world rules will lead to restrictions on use. But the power is essentially the same, universal in all realms, it just takes different forms of expression. You can say that the power is sealed and restricted, but you can never say that it disappears. Southerners eat rice and northerners eat steamed buns, but they can essentially provide energy. A mage who relies on the spirit to drive the elements in the atmosphere to cast spells, but has no magic power, would be restless in another world. But the protagonist has a situation where the power is stored in his own body and the power belongs to himself. Why would the power disappear? He is not a child in kindergarten. Does such a simple logic still need to be explained?
It's outrageous. The Immortal of Six Paths has nanometers that are close to the level of a single universe. Not to mention the accumulation of the earth for thousands of years, the energy of the earth's rotation for ten thousand years is not as much as the sun releases in one second.
A comprehensive comic about the combat system. Either don't write about the specific system at all, just write about the abilities obtained by the protagonist, make a hodgepodge, don't write about the realm at all, and just write about what the protagonist can do. Either you should only practice one system that is sufficient from the beginning as the backbone, and use other systems as functional supplements. Or even if you choose a hexagon like magnetic field rotation at the beginning, you will not need other world powers. Or integrate all the power you have obtained and use your own inspiration to directly create a system that suits you. But the idea of the protagonist in this book is very strange. His idea is to dismantle the extraordinary system that he used to travel through the world, and then leave only the content needed for the Lord God's space division method that he had seen before traveling. It's like when he got the gene lock, he was sure that other systems were all crooked, and the gene lock was the road. He just left the parts that fit the gene lock without thinking.
Resurrected but shortened, the two chapters combined are not as good as the previous one
Before the update was discontinued, I was wondering whether the increase in combat power would be too fast, wouldn't it be unfinished? But when I thought about the god's resurrection mentioned earlier, I felt that it wouldn't be unfinished, but I didn't expect it to be unfinished.
The plot is well written, and the writing and plot arrangements are okay. It's just that the protagonist always likes to force the extraordinary powers of other worlds into the main god space. There are so many worlds, and most of them don't meet the main god space classification standards at all. The protagonist still insists on thinking that the advancement of the main god space he imagined is okay, just because of the genetic lock? Then why don't you think that your world is also a copy of the Lord God, or that it is recruiting people every day? Why have others never awakened the gene lock? Are you the best among several worlds? The protagonist claims that the gene lock is his foundation, but in fact, he just imagined the exchange price of the main god space, and then imagined how to practice. According to the division of protagonists, the Dragon Ball system is almost enough to beat C to death. After all, it only has Qi and does not build any training circuit at all. However, in fact, beating C with Dragon Ball is the same as playing. This is why when everyone compares their combat power, they end up calculating their losses. After all, only attack damage is universal and can be calculated.
Even if you step on an ant to death, you can write about a world war. I admire you.
Chapter 85: Why did he suddenly seize his body? Although I know that if the protagonist needs to have a chakra system, it is very convenient to seize the body. But just hope to get chakra from that body, but don't use it as your own body! The protagonist already has so many wives, so don't write down this poisonous point!
Listen to the persuasive tactics and talk about leaking girls? The author directly named the popular heroines one by one and had them fight and moan? Then just beat up the primitive people and become invincible. I feel like it won't be long before I see it. Hahahahaha. Anyway, it's quite fun.
Just kill him directly and call his subordinates. Obviously you can slap him to death and kill other people who have objections, but you still have to stall for time... These people obviously want to confront the protagonist, and they can be killed with just a face-to-face meeting.
Chapter 016: Bunny girl Sakurajima Mai's night attack, a real gift (please give me flowers and data) written by Tie Niu Niu Mian Mian.
Can the process be sped up? The pace is too slow now