Honkai: Star Rail: Selling Traits on the Astral Express
崩铁：我在星琼列车卖词条
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 8k Words
- Genre
- Sci-Fi & Gaming
- Subgenre
- Virtual MMORPG
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
4Chapters
219.4kReads
351Flowers
10.0Score
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Reader comments 2
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Writing a novel is not about writing a little bit, then thinking a little bit in your mind, and then writing a little bit more based on the progress in your mind. If you write like this, what do you want readers to see? , Is it possible that you still have to figure out the part you imagined?
Author, you have a good beginning, but you added chatting inexplicably. Isn't it a bit too hasty? It's not too late to start a chat in the middle. , You opened it right from the beginning, and you opened it too awkwardly. The first point is that during the chat, the butterfly ninja actually said that demons will destroy the world. Isn't this a bit outrageous? Does anyone in Demon Slayer know that their place is called Ghost Face World? Is it possible that Butterfly Ninja is still a time traveler? , The second point is, how can we say calmly: It seems that we are not in the same world. , It feels like a lot of dialogue has been skipped and the results are shown directly, but this creates a very awkward feeling.