Anime Crossover: I, the Five-Spirit King, Join the Chat Group

When I said it, I didn't feel good about Nalan Yanran.

Elementary school students write dialogues like essays

The main character you wrote is a bit **, Thor, maybe you didn't portray the character well, but since you have such a character, I feel uncomfortable if you follow the original plot. The main character comes to save her, not to mention the initial taunting, and then plans to spray the main character to death. After finding that she is suppressed and unable to stop, the main character becomes the Five Spirit King. I didn't care at all, so I went to draw the sword. I stopped reading when I saw this. Is this what Thor is like in the original work? Forget it if you are OOC. I can't accept it if you write according to the character you portray, but if you come up with such a **** character, then your operation should also change. Is this kind of lack of teaching a lesson and keeping it for the New Year? I want to kill the protagonist, but the protagonist doesn't care at all and goes up to save her. Why, who is the protagonist?

You mentioned here that the protagonist himself is the Five Spirit King, so why does he need the Five Spirit Lock?

The author would like to make a suggestion, like at the beginning of the plot, some of the female protagonists had close relationships with the indigenous people and hoped to change it. For example, Miura Yuko has a crush on Hayama, Apocalypse Miyamoto and Takagi like Komuro, and An Yirun and Eri are childhood sweethearts. I hope these similar to Tau Spirit Green can be avoided. Personally, I suggest just writing out or not appearing the male protagonists of these original works.

Does the Five Spirit King still need the Five Spirit Lock? Are you afraid that others won't snatch it?

I took a look at the setting of the five-chain chain, and the more I thought about it, the more something was wrong. I guess there will be a wave of it when the time comes. In reality. The scene where the protagonist pretends to be cool and then is robbed of the martial soul lock is such an obvious thing. As long as he doesn't, he will definitely be interested in seeing the protagonist use extraordinary power. It's just to make myself feel uncomfortable. After all, the protagonist in the chat** forcibly demoted himself and became brothers with them. It is estimated that it is a normal behavior in the main world. When extraordinary power appears, it will definitely cause a lot of nonsense, and it is still very kind. For details, you can read the original story: Pig Man reveals his identity after his transformation, and Prince Rose is looking for trouble.

Speaking of which, the protagonist should not have the Five Spirit Lock stolen in the original work. I hope the Wulin Lock can be transformed into a normal thing. Like a watch, otherwise it would be uncomfortable if others worry about locking it. Even if the protagonist doesn't need to use the martial arts lock to transform, it's still uncomfortable to be noticed by the thief.

Isn't the Five Spirit Lock what the ancestors of Confused Lao Deng used to seal the Five Spirit King? I don't know much about it. Why are you carrying that thing with you? He is the King of Five Spirits. If he wants to share his strength, he can just rub it with his hands.

Doesn't that woman doubt that the protagonist is a time traveler? She just said his name. Isn't King Wuling's name only the King of Five Spirits?