Beng Tie: Breeding Order, Join the Chat Group

Writing novels in Feilu basically requires a harem, believe me If you don't have a harem, you won't be able to write in Feilu.

The previous writing was okay, but when it came to chatting, it fell apart. The protagonist had just joined, but he was chatting like a family, and the character design was completely broken. Moreover, before the protagonist joined, there were already many members, and they had been getting along for a long time when they talked. It was only after chatting with the protagonist that I realized that everyone is on the same plane. This is outrageous. Isn't this exaggerating the role of the protagonist? It's too exaggerated. It's pure fantasy and has no real feeling at all.

In the part about chasing Feixiao, Feixiao is so fast that it can be compared with a sports car, which is really funny. Although it is not shown in the game, if you are a star-exploding powerhouse or a close combat type, you have to be a thousand times the speed of sound to be considered fast.

Try not to write about two time-travelers

The writing about chat** transactions feels very strange to me.

It's no longer water, it's water sea

A system that doesn't deserve a name, haha

There are too many typos, which affects the perception.

Find a job in a factory, you really **write books

So it takes the protagonist most of the day to fight each of the commander's clones?

Comments on Chapter 48 of "Beng Tie: Breeding Order, Join the Chat Group" written by Da Yu Yu Yu Yu: Road meets Feixiao, speed competition.