Dragon Ball: I, Son Gohan, Come Clean

I couldn't stand the first chapter. Author, if you don't revise it, even the readers who have read the original Dragon Ball will not be able to read this book.

Grab Bulma and No. 18, ****, How old were you at that time, were you so awesome? Has the little kid grown up? Damn it, you directly time-traveled to a Saiyan who is about the same age as Sun Wukong, and snatched Bulma and No. 18, And you time-traveled to a four- or five-year-old brat, are you a psychopath?

I feel like the author has never read the original work

In the next episode, the protagonist uses the dragon balls to make a wish to enlarge his mother Qiqi to a height of 108,000 meters.

A fake Gohan, a fake Goku. Wukong's character design doesn't match up at all.

Against the sky, Chun Yun, in the first chapter, I was speechless when I saw how arrogant Sun Wukong was, the most powerful warrior in the world. . . . At this time, Sun Wukong is still a martial arts master and will not say such things, because he understands that there is heaven outside the world and there are people outside the world. He will only become stronger to protect the earth. Author Chun Yun, the first character design collapsed

In the next episode, the protagonist uses the dragon balls to make a wish for Sun Wukong's wife to grow to a height of one hundred and eighty thousand meters.

You're totally wrong, you can't connect the previous chapter to the last chapter, you're such a jerk that I can't understand it at all.

Planet Vegeta? Isn't it already gone?

Commentary on Chapter 15: Limits of "Dragon Ball: My Son Gohan Shows Off" written by Song Ta.