The Chef of Gensokyo

The book is a good book, but it's not divided into sections and makes it uncomfortable to read.

When did neetji's ability become charm? She is just a beauty and cannot reach the level of magic ability.

Also, Yakumo Blue can't defeat the superior. Most of them are tricked by Zima and can't do anything about it.

It's a bit unreasonable to lie to someone about losing money. You just throw the money away in front of the person who lent you the money. This is an attitude that doesn't take it seriously. Under normal circumstances, who would be willing to lend you money? Besides, 100,000 yuan is not a small amount, and other people are not fools. If you lose money, you will react like this. Who doesn't think there is something wrong with it?

The author should practice typesetting and paragraphing. The words are crowded together and there are typos and sentences that are particularly uncomfortable to watch.

The Chinese New Year is coming soon, and I have been busy moving bricks to make money for the New Year's Eve dinner. The work will be updated after the new year. Please forgive me for any inaccuracies. Thank you for your support

One more mention can be made in terms of segmentation.

Commentary on Chapter 45: Morning Fritters in "The Chef of Gensokyo" written by Xiao Liuli from Mondstadt.

I feel like the plot was written too quickly, and this is probably a food story. It's okay when cooking, but it's just brushed off when eating or tasting. I wrote it too fast.

Commentary on Chapter 3 Night in the Forest of "The Chef of Gensokyo" written by Xiao Liuli from Mondstadt.