Anime Crossover Slice of Life: I'm Surrounded by Anime Girls

One million per month? Not a buddy? The monthly rent for student dormitories in Japan is about 80,000 yuan, or even higher. Is this equivalent to charging rent for only a dozen people?

Yukino and Suzune are written too much, you know. The other female characters seem dispensable, and there are big problems with the system settings of your Goldfinger. For example, the tasks of the tenants are all fulfilled by the protagonist. When there are more people in the future, the protagonist will be too busy. Moreover, the prices of points are written in a variety of ways. Expanding the kitchen costs 10,000, changing the tenant's super power costs at least 100,000, and treating a serious injury is not even comparable to the enterprise. The valley has to be equivalent to the super power. This is the price paid by the landlord. Even if the protagonist changes to a healing technique or the like, I won't say anything. Moreover, the protagonist is really casual in adding tasks. Just saying hello will get 100,000 points in a month. It would be better if you just write 100 million. You are not just a simple and crude sign-in system to directly give rewards. A cheat like you needs at least a reasonable underlying structure.

At first glance, it means that the five elements are not five substances or so-called elements, but five properties, which can cover almost all substances in the world. Are there too few options? Only high-level training and high-level martial arts? Isn't there Minenosaki? Is there no Moon Forest? Doesn't Zanzhou Middle School have one? Isn't it available in Otonogizaka? Isn't there Sakuragaoka? Is there no Oarai? Isn't there Tokiwadai? Didn't Sakura have it? Isn't it clear? Doesn't Huang Ying have it? Wait wait wait

The most basic thing in writing a novel is typos, and the second is the speed of updating. You have dozens if not hundreds of typos in this chapter. Did you post them directly in just one go?

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