Honkai: Star Rail: I Own an Adventure Village

Let's put it this way, the protagonist of Asasi, who is currently in Polu, is actually not very likable.

The skill consumption is too much, do you think it is reasonable?

Not to mention your ruined power system, the key is how you portray your male protagonist. Cocolia doesn't care about your business, but you agree to it just like everyone else. You still put her at home, are you out of your mind?

The characters are written like **, let's practice writing and then talk about it

I feel like your progress is too slow now, and there aren't even a few characters on the shelves yet.

What about free attribute points???? Don't you want to add some?

Also, your main plot should be that the protagonist promotes the construction and growth of this village, but you haven't reflected this main plot until now.

Comments on Chapter 15 of "Beng Tie: I Have an Adventure Village" written by Happy Walker: Sambo: I recognize profiteers, but I do not recognize liars.

I just finished reading it, and the power system is a bit strange. It would be better to just replace the blue bars with mana spiritual power or the like. In this way, no matter what profession you are in, there will be unified standards. Then it is best to stick to the original world to avoid writing it to collapse like the previous book. You can carefully refine the worldview and system of the adventure world. It seems that the buildings are also upgradeable, allowing them to be expanded and supplemented with upgrades. If you want to write about Xingtetsu Genshin, it is best not to interfere too much or it will easily explode. Finally, I think this new book still has great potential as a daily farming article. I hope the author will continue his work and I look forward to it.

Commentary on the first chapter of "Beng Tie: I Have an Adventure Village" written by Happy Walker, Wu Xie.