Back to the 1980s to Hunt: My Wife Forces Me to Take a Live-In Son-in-Law

My personal suggestion is that it is best to change the nouns to familiar ones, otherwise no one except readers from the Northeast will know it immediately. You can write, for example, what is a cannon egg, a noun unique to the Northeast, and then use wild boar for subsequent descriptions. I don't understand anyway, what yellow hair is running away, what is a cannon egg and that. When you write the dialogue between the characters, change back to the Northeastern nouns. Now, who doesn't jump quickly when reading a book?

The protagonist puts in the most effort every time, but the prey ends up being divided equally. This is not how human nature works, and it makes people uncomfortable to watch.

Hunting is fun to watch, but it's not fun to watch when someone is always looking for trouble. Write less of that kind of plot.

Damn it, 3.3 Million reward, author, you are going to post it

Isn't it said that wild boar's belly is the most valuable?

Alas, the flying dragon was eaten as a protected animal The Heilongjiang Feilong Banquet is really incomparable to the eight major cuisines.

Can you please stop writing some words that I can't understand, such as what is that cannon egg?

I am also convinced that people's names are always wrong. What is the name of the protagonist?

To summarize, there are too many skipped chapters, so don't say you don't understand. Helping: usually refers to a family where the man has lost his labor force due to various problems. At this time, another man is needed to help with life. Cohabitation without marriage, two men and one woman, but in this article, the man is disabled after the woman marries, and has not been touched** Gray * squirrel ** red * jackal ** yellow-skinned yellow-leaf weasel ** - big adult red deer ** egg-shaped sub-minor red deer ** small yellow-haired immature wild boar ** cannon egg adult boar, breeding pig, meat is very smelly ** big paws: Siberian tiger, tiger The current leopard here is: Far Eastern leopard, also known as Siberian leopard ** Tiger cub: lynx **Bear Tyrant, Bear Bear: A brown bear weighing more than 800 kilograms, or more than a thousand kilograms** Head-to-head Xiang: A good hunter who can distinguish the direction of the prey's scent from the air*** Lower-head Xiang: A hunting dog who can smell the prey, but not too much or too far away** Gunner: A man who is very good at hunting in Shilibaxiang. ** Pig God: A wild boar that has been severely beaten by hunters countless times, lived for many years, and has a long memory. It is a bit magical. ** Gun barrel: refers to a No. 16 Gun, with a semi-automatic barrel and a 762mm bullet.

Except for the chapter title, which is a bit of a title, everything else is pretty good.