In Handong: Uncle Dong Urges Me to Obey the Law

Why do you have to show off? It's a good start, but you have to develop some unclear relationship with the Middle Eastern tsar and princess in your past life to promote yourself. Is it necessary? This will only make readers feel ****. Do you think people at that level have time to read your novel? In reality, people who read novels are just the rich second generation, and then civilians or The person is a rich, somewhat well-established official who is either busy working or popping champagne all day long. When I read your novel, there is no way to bring you into your past life. It is generally like a killer who has traveled through time, an official who has traveled through time, and various big bosses who have traveled through time. It is the least immersive. Don't you write novels without any brains?

Literary men are the most uncharacteristic. Gao Yuliang found a mistress, embezzled, illegally granted land, and protected him.

With Zhong Xiaoai, how dare you recognize your father Gao Yuliang? Something wrong with your brain?

It's so **watery. The plot of waking up in the hospital at the beginning goes on for many chapters, all based on your self-righteous analysis. Who will read it?

Did he also protect QJ's relatives? Or did he replace all the Anti-Corruption Bureau gatekeepers with family members?

The biggest inertia cognitive loophole in People's Yi is Hou Liangping and Zhong Xiaoai. They both think that Zhong has a monstrous background. How can Hou be ordinary since he has a monstrous background? And why is it that she is not the most popular figure in school? There is only one possibility to hide it. Plus, she is not very beautiful in school, at least not as low-key as in the past few years. Hou's background is not weak, otherwise they cannot get along. As for minor problems, it is normal, for example, rich primary school students always have good friends.

It's better than OK, but it's a little watery and too draggy.

You're pretty, but you're really a jerk

After reading a few of them, I felt they were a bit confusing. I opened the book review and read it. It may be more confusing later on. Forget it, don't waste your time.

It would be nice to reduce these 500,000 words to 100,000.