Dashing Youth: Master of the Heavenly Secrets Pavilion, Getting Stronger Whenever I Expose Secrets

After reading it again, I feel that the author has a few questions The first one is that every time those people are described when they heard the news, they always use the phrase "how to go home like that". Not to mention that writing this way will make people feel that the plot is too simple. Repeating it too many times will not be fresh and boring, and there are too many descriptions in this aspect. The second one is that since he said it was the Three Questions of Tianji Pavilion, he could only answer three questions, but the protagonist in it kept breaking news. Even though he answered the question, you still had to explain another question to him with extra kindness. This was no longer three questions. And now that the protagonist has revealed so much, how to write the next chapters. The third thing I feel is that the author has a bit of a problem with the setting of the relationship between the characters in it. After reading the full text, there are many small problems, but there are still advantages. I just hope that the author will change it and the main protagonist will not expose too much of his own kindness.

How big is your house? How many people are in it? Good guy, you can ask more than a dozen people with one question. There are not enough people to leave. The problem is that you can ask more than a dozen people with one question. There is no end to your people here, right?

After reading it, I think it's okay, but I feel like the author is not familiar with the original work or the TV series. There are some mistakes in the names of some people.

Why did you expose the article to fight for hegemony? It's still ridiculous. Forget it.

Whether I made a mistake or not, it's meaningless. Anyone can easily ask questions to embarrass the protagonist. The protagonist said nothing at all without any cost.

Author, are you sure you are writing about Tianji Pavilion and not a storyteller? See for yourself what it looks like. If you hadn't been unable to rate and leave negative reviews every minute, and you couldn't stop asking three questions, I would be really convinced. Tianji Pavilion is a silkworm, and it is completely the path of a storyteller.

TM is written like a storyteller

The protagonist has been drinking tea from the first chapter to now. Is it a tea bucket?

Take it off the shelves, I'll die when I see that Changsheng is poisonous, I'll drink tea all the time haha. There are also heavenly beings who can live for thousands and tens of thousands of years. Isn't it embarrassing what you wrote?

Author? Have you ever watched Shaobai? Su Changhe is not the patriarch, and Jinxuan is not the chief eunuch yet, but he is the chief eunuch Zhuoqing!