Star Iron: Diary Review, Esta at the Beginning
星铁：日记点评，开局艾丝妲
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 445k Words
- Genre
- Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Otherworld Continent
- Audience
- For men
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Faloo
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2.8MReads
8.4kFlowers
9.8 · 706Score
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We can't write novels without common sense, okay? You still want to make clothes out of one foot two of cotton? What are you thinking about? Ask the old man. Taking a person who is 1.75 Meters tall as an example, a shirt will generally need about seven feet of fabric and pants will need about three feet. Of course, what we are talking about here is the standard width of 1.5 Meters. If it is a small piece of 1.1 Meters, you need to add more fabric. As for the one-foot-two pieces of fabric used to make clothes, they are for infants and young children, or other things such as sheets and quilts.
I've read 30% of it. The author's writing is really good. I like it very much.
What does Jade say? It was said in Chapter 2, but I reviewed someone in Chapter 11 and got a diary again?
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It's okay. As long as you don't write too deceptive plots for 8 and maintain the current level, it should be popular.
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I can only say that overall it's pretty good, but the author just wants to write about Machiavellianism. I can only say that if he writes more about Machiavellianism, I'm afraid not many people will subscribe.
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