Ren Zai Zong Man, the Mastermind Behind the Revival of Spiritual Energy

Nowadays, the author behind the scenes focuses on one main character without publishing a single chapter, and describes the supporting characters to death. It is said that the protagonist Chun Chun is just an event generator. He has no power and does nothing. He hides behind the system screen and talks a lot, but no one recognizes him at all. "You never show up" and "people don't know you at all" are two different things. There is no feeling like you never show up but your legend is everywhere in the world.

After reading the first three chapters, I found it not very good. It felt like the author was deliberately showing off his writing style, but ended up not weighing his own weight. It was quite embarrassing.

There are a lot of poisonous points, just like the previous low-profile Demon King, I can read it, but it is too uncomfortable EX.

I'm laughing so hard. I looked at the comment section. I'm writing a comic novel and playing zzzq. Are you sober, the author?

It's so damn cool, I'm really speechless. One sentence is said over and over again. It's a description of the heart of a blockbuster movie. The protagonist appears in one sentence in an average of five chapters. It's pure cheating.

I want to see the protagonist show off. . . The protagonist of the manga novel has always been invisible, even the novel about the mastermind behind the scenes can't help it. Can you write more scenes where the protagonist comes out to show off? ! Please write less about other passers-by's perspectives.

At Dongda University, go to the editor with the title of the book and ask for permission, delete it and it will be ok. This is obviously a setting that you just made up in your head. It has never been done before. I guess you may have added a temporary setting after reading my comment? It's a bit embarrassing. My comment was to suggest that you skip Dongda and don't write about it. Don't even mention it. I'm not asking you to add a setting of technological ascension to Dongda. This setting is too damaging to the look and feel, and it also destroys the worldview you built earlier. If you don't change it, it will be really hard to accept. I suggest you still You need to ask the editor for permission to delete it. Fortunately, you have added a new setting and it is the latest chapter. It is not troublesome to change it. You can just delete those few paragraphs. If the editor is there, it can be done in less than a minute. If he is not there tonight, you can just go and ask for permission tomorrow. Don't take it seriously, take a look at the comment section, many readers are dissatisfied with this setting.

What do you say about the section about Dongda's ascension? To use an analogy, Muzan, the biggest villain in Demon Slayer, was cut into a semi-crippled state by a deceased character Enichi Tsugoku who lived in the background legend. He was left with shadow trauma for life, and the villain's ceiling was gone. He became the lowest known villain in the world, and his combat power was clear at a glance. The subsequent growth of the protagonist and his victory over him were all based on the success of the sequel. On the foreshadowing of National Enchantment, Breathing Pattern He Dao doesn't have these demon slayers to beat the head, and the villain behind your book should obviously be above everything else. Now that the strong character is gone, no matter how you develop in the future, others will always be a head above you. And according to your description, the development of the protagonist is based on others' ascension and mercy. What about the strong character of the villain's mastermind behind the scenes? . What else do you want readers to think? . Do you feel immersed? . Hey, come and eat?

If you write that the protagonist will have no role, just use the background to play the protagonist. What we want to see is the male protagonist pretending to be cool, not others pretending, and there will be less palace fighting and so on. You just write one or two, and you also write so many supporting roles. The protagonist has no role, so is he still the protagonist? Isn't it just a background board? How can readers enjoy it like this? The mastermind behind the scenes is that the protagonist must have a sense of presence and the feeling of pretentiousness. It cannot be highlighted by just relying on your other supporting characters to show off. If you act like this, then it will become **like, **like I have never seen it on this site.

I should have run away from this book after reading it, but as a result, I couldn't think of enough to read more than 100 chapters, and it was all rubbish.

The stupidest thing is that from the beginning, everyone knows that the protagonist is a special lucky guy, but for dozens of chapters, no one says what is special. So everyone knows that it is co-authored, but the readers don't know, right? I mentioned it again and again, pure **** person

Conquer some elves that Crimson doesn't have, such as Gardevoir and Lucario. If it is the same as the red elf, it feels like the red time travel is not the protagonist.

I really don't want to scold you, don't force me, it's still ambiguous

Does anyone like reading this type of book?

It's not enough, I like most of the music in it! Better to include a Maroon 1 song! And the Dream Dragon Band!

If you dare to write something super awesome, it would be best to change your name and write it.

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