In the World of White Horse, I Become a Qi Refiner from the Start

The protagonist is a useless person who can no longer be useless. The six-year-old awakening system has a sign-in reward every day, and the one who rides the horse is the innate holy body Taoist fetus. He only reaches the innate realm when he is sixteen or seventeen years old, and there are always people who use it to accumulate internal energy for the protagonist. He is a hundred miles away. Dong Jun was born with martial arts and his master built up internal strength in his body. He started practicing martial arts at the age of sixteen and reached the realm of freedom in about four years. The protagonist is a loser. The author wrote that the protagonist has an innate holy body, which is simply an insult to this physique.

What's the point of writing? The protagonist doesn't have much role. So far, everything has been written around Baili Dongjun. If you want to write his story, just reborn as Baili Dongjun from the beginning. Why create another mission? What's wrong?

It's a thing that doesn't distinguish between primary and secondary. The writing is poor, but it's still monk writing.

Why so many? Either Baili Dongjun's younger brother or older brother's

In what age is there still someone writing a book like this? Are you in the wrong place?

What kind of writing is this? It looks weird.

Commentary on Chapter 2 of Ziyu, the Great Swordsman, written by Riding a Pig at the age of eight, "A Man on a White Horse, Starting to Become a Qi Practitioner".

After watching it for a while, Baili Dongjun is your father. There is nothing else to do except lick him.

Due to the typhoon, there was a power outage in the author's place, so he took a few days off. We hope you can share with us.

The plot feels too scattered, making it difficult to connect the plot, and it feels like it is not written around the protagonist, making it difficult to relate to it.