Comprehensive Comic: I Maxed Out My Skills and Wanted to Be Bad, but They Said I Would Destroy the World.

How can I put it, the setting of the protagonist seems to be quite strong, but I am really a bit dizzy when I read it. Many places are inexplicable. This should be a writing problem, and it feels like the author writes whatever he thinks of. Various settings and plots are all integrated into it like a big pot stew. It is difficult for me to understand what the protagonist is going to do and what he wants to do. The beginning is inexplicable. The wonderful thing is to directly remove the restrictions of the world, start a chat for no reason, and then the protagonist becomes a world-destroying existence or something. It really makes my scalp numb. It's not that there is no reason, but the reason is very strange. Someone arranges for people to come to your house, and you just die with everyone. The brain circuit of normal people shouldn't be someone who arranged to kill all the chickens to scare the monkeys? Changing the protagonist here will directly and inexplicably start the end of the world. Is this really random?

Let me talk about the conclusion first, sorry that this book is cut off. This is my first time writing a book, and I didn't handle a lot of things well. For example, the character on the show has the same name as the dish, The Riddler, which looks messy. I decided to delete all the irrelevant content in this book. Concentrate on writing about getting girls and fighting.

First, Goldfinger can travel through it at will and choose a location. Why not go super runaway? Touching the crystal can strengthen the soul. Second, I feel that the Dafa of absorbing energy is not the right way. If you are older, you can learn the Bone Strengthening Chapter of the Book of Changes. You can also eat Bodhisattva snake. Thirdly, Chinese martial arts can also be practiced, and reaching the level of Wang Invincible is also very impressive. Anyway, there are a lot of good things, and the one who took the pill to become smarter, nzt48

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Please ask the author, did you write Date A Live? Please reply. I hope you write Date A Live. Of course the decision is yours. Hope you can give me an answer. Also, if you write Date A Live, I have a request. I hope you can write all the elves. Don't forget the game wizard

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