Anime Crossover: All the Heroines Are My Ex-Girlfriends

Can you please stop licking Kasumigaoka like that! It almost made me feel physically sick. At Yinglili's house, Kasumigaoka rushed back early in the morning to make breakfast for her after just one phone call. Even if she accepts a disciple, she will look at her face. Is she the protagonist's ancestor? Such a lick!

To be honest, I think a normal person, who comes home after a tiring day and is scolded by his tenant, should immediately let the tenant pack up and leave, especially if this tenant is his ex-girlfriend. No matter how you broke up, you have already broken up. You don't have to cook him a dinner and joke with him in a good-humoured way. You are already single! No longer*, no longer the one who is always available*! No matter how you break up, who will be by your side during the most difficult moment? No, you got through it by yourself, so you don't need to lick it. Brother, I feel so aggrieved. Why do you have to lick it? Can't you live without a woman? After you came home and got scolded, you still cooked dinner for someone in a nice manner. This is your home, not hers, this is your home! Let her get out!!!

This novel can only be said to be a gold mine. After the revision, the poisonous points are almost gone. The only thing that is a little poisonous to me personally is that the protagonist is an Asashi warm man, and he is somewhat slutty. The shortcoming is that the protagonist has no clear purpose. It is said that he wants to take revenge on Yukinoshita, but he hardly takes any measures. Any action is too bland. As for some people in the comment area who said that there shouldn't be Miko and there shouldn't be extraordinary, this is impossible. If there is no extraordinary, it will be difficult for the protagonist to feed a woman. Anyway, I have never seen a man who eats seven times a night. Even if he takes the little blue pill five times a night,

Normal authors get better and better the more they write, but we authors like to do the opposite.

On the premise that there are ghosts and supernatural powers in this world, you still plan to write a business war and resist the Yukinoshita family. To be honest, the sense of separation is really serious. In the background of ghosts, the protagonist is still building a company for money. In this case, shouldn't the protagonist find a way to gain power? Plus, the protagonist is really a bit added. Facing Kirisu Mafuyu's obedience, even if there are no ghosts, the protagonist still needs to go to school honestly when he has 1.5 US dollars? Coupled with Kasumigaoka's bad mouth at the beginning, the protagonist's choice is to cook a meal for Kasumigaoka

What's your level? What's the use of deleting comments and escaping?

So the protagonist is a time traveler? The time traveler doesn't know the heroine? If you write like this, just don't write about time travellers. If you write about people who are separated from each other, they will look silly!

To be honest, in my book, a 9.8 Rating is the lowest I can accept. Generally, if it is below 9.8, It is mostly due to some points in the plot or the author being outrageous. Your book has already reached a 9.5 Rating, but looking at the comment area, I feel that the atmosphere is okay. I want to click in, but I don't dare to read the rating. I am entangled...

Hearing that the heroine joined, he joined in too. No, doesn't the protagonist know what An Yilun is too? Not letting the heroine leave him, she still has to go inside

Can't you change your body? It's true that you have to change your body, and this plot is also really poisonous.