Hawks in the Military Industry: I Started by Creating a National Defense Lottery

Review, the writing is okay but the plot is not that good. After reading more than 20 chapters, I can accept doting on Qiong Mei, but when I write about Qiong Mei being angry, I just feel that the character is broken, and the reason is far-fetched. It doesn't matter if she joins Yukino's club, but from the look of it, I just feel that the male protagonist is aggrieved. It would be better for Yukino to join the exorcism department and the male protagonist be the minister. There is also the need to discuss the rules to determine ethics, which is stinky and long. You must know that the villain is difficult to make, which only makes the protagonist unworthy. When reality is taken into account, the novel becomes uncomfortable. As for the part about Lun Ye's house, the passers-by wrote it in a confusing way, and the details were missing. The point is, it doesn't matter if you write a good harem pleasure story in a comprehensive manga and your male protagonist has a bad reputation, but there are problems with the emotional scenes in the first twenty chapters, especially with Yukino and Qiong, which give people the feeling that the male protagonist is very weak. Originally, comprehensive comics were a bit niche and I didn't often see new books. But with a male protagonist like this, it would be too easy to get hooked.

None of the fourteen books has been completed, and now eight are serialized at the same time. How can you expect me to read them with confidence?

An academician is actually just a research assistant. I don't understand and am shocked.

I just saw Chapter 63** National Defense Lottery... People took out their mobile phones to scan the code to buy? ? ? ? So advanced in 1995?

Six rockets were fired, two were intercepted, and six more hit. Couldn't the author use some snacks when writing?

This brain ginseng thing actually made the list. ? ? ?

Author of The Eunuch Who Will Not Retreat to Life or Death

This book is really a bit too high to be praised as a super god.

Can you please stop talking so much nonsense in each of the best TMs? If you write well, you will definitely get votes and rewards.

Scan the QR code to buy lottery tickets in 1995

Nowadays, the military industry is too conservative in writing. Every day, it is either blocking cables or J-20s. In previous novels, the Hokage base has been established.

Gao Lu and Li Nian are also good. Bai Bing, Zhang Xinyu, Lu Yangyang, Tong Liya and other female roles can be added.

**Can I scan the QR code to buy lottery tickets at the end of the year? Were there cell phones back then?

Author, you are also a talent. Chapter 3, did you say OK at the military-industrial conference? ? ? ? ? ?

Would it be possible to die if I didn't write so much nonsense at the end of each chapter? *

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Without Hua Chenyu, wouldn't you be able to write novels? **

My personal suggestion is to give a system space and put some things for easy access. The system space can be infinite and divided into several areas: collections, assets, wearables, and tools. Give me a clothing, socks and shoe making machine. Sometimes when you are interested, don't buy it immediately.

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It's a mess and I can't understand it.

Please delete this book immediately. Isn't this a salty fish party? This special cat is clearly a close friend.

Why are there two updates every two days?

What time is it? The author is still sleeping. Get up soon and start typing.

One chapter is missing, author. Where is chapter 135?

Will the protagonist be allowed to travel to other worlds?

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