Siheyuan: in 1944, Li Yunlong Was Sniped at the Beginning

Let me give you a critical review. Just by looking at your profile, I can tell how good your writing is. In your long profile, only the name of the protagonist appears. The rest, plug-ins, background, characters, or plot, etc., Are not included. I can only say that it is better not to have this profile.

And there are not many worlds that are better than Hakoba. I can't find them yet. I'm speechless. Even Eternal Calamity is at least as good as Hakoba. The main character written later becomes the Virgin Asasi and has no brains.

When I interviewed someone, they said there were a lot of loopholes. As for the protagonist, blah blah blah, he solved all the technical difficulties. Do other countries in the province know how to solve all the technical difficulties, just to spare that woman from asking you to talk? How much money did other countries charge?

Are you writing about domestic officialdom? Just because you are the son of a prefecture-level municipal party committee secretary, can you afford to sleep with the women you sleep with?

Why would a perfectly good man transform into a woman? Or do you think there are many gender distinctions?

How is endless wealth defined? Just common currencies or all currencies on earth? If it's the latter, wouldn't it be better to go to any top world with a certain order, such as "Swallowing the Sky", than this one?

After confronting the young master, he fainted, and in front of his wife?

Such a powerful golden finger has been blinded for nothing. It is not free at all. Since you have traveled through time and are so powerful, you will definitely kill all the little devils. Can you still kill them all after joining the gang? I think the most hateful thing is the traitor.

They are still special forces, and they don't even bother to pretend.

In fact, I have always wanted to read Conan fanfics about Kaito Kidd. Now that the writing is good, I suggest that the author change the name to something related to Kaito Kidd. Maybe the exposure will be higher and the results will be better...

The protagonist is so awesome and just goes to the island country to do it. They only have so many people from top to bottom and kill them all. Wouldn't it be better to just kill them until they are extinct?

As for Chapter 60, is it because of copper smelting?

Now that Iron Man is out, dozens of nuclear bombs will solve the problem, so there's nothing left to fight.

Drive high and go low, your serum is full of water, right? Climbing a wall is so strenuous

Opera belongs to "learning", okay? The only real "singing" is Taiping lyrics

The harder you hit Feng Yu, the better it will be that you won't be able to play basketball anymore and become a street rat who won't be able to join the basketball circle.

The book is okay, but the update is too slow and there are too many introductions. Please write it quickly.

Genetic viruses are already available, they exist for a long time, the cost is low, and they spread easily. I don't know why I didn't use it after using it once? Use it more often, the war will be over long ago. Even if you go crazy and exterminate the entire clan, it won't take even a year and a half!

Ouyang Ke should have been Hou Yi in Jingwei Reclamation in his previous life, and Guo Jing couldn't be Li Xiaoyao, right?

Regarding Chapter 31 of "Siheyuan: 1944, the Sniper Killed Li Yunlong at the Beginning" written by Po Yue Suixing: The sniper kill failed, Lou Guangcheng's suspicion! Chapter review.

About "The Evolution of Killing, From Forest Spider to Abyss Demon" written by Pale Mercury Lamp 009 Mutation! Silver Moon Wolf King! Chapter review.

Regarding Chapter 10 of "Siheyuan: 44 Years, Killing Li Yunlong at the Beginning" written by Po Yue Sui Xing: Swallow Li San was discovered, and Li Yunxi was injured! Chapter review.

About Chapter 7 of "Siheyuan: 44 Years, Sniper Killing Li Yunlong at the Beginning" written by Po Yue Suixing: Super sniper rifle, Yanzimen Li Yunxi! Chapter review.

I would feel awkward using the skills of the Hokage seal in other worlds

About Chapter 6 of "Siheyuan: In 1944, Killing Li Yunlong at the Beginning" written by Po Yue Sui Xing: Action again, killing eight little days! Chapter review.

About Chapter 5 of "Siheyuan: 1944, Killing Li Yunlong at the Beginning" written by Po Yue Suixing: A middle-aged deaf old lady moves into the Siheyuan! [Seeking data support] Chapter review.

Chapter 11: Sniper Killing Li Yunlong, Grandmaster Level Qinggong Chapter 11 of "Siheyuan: 44 Years, Sniper Killing Li Yunlong at the Beginning" written by Po Yue Sui Xing.

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