Honkai Impact 3rd: Cringe Fanfic, From the Start I'm the Shenzhou Tablet

Why do you always have to touch the Porcelain Star God?

The title and content basically don't match, and the plot doesn't flow smoothly and the sentences don't make sense. Watery and boring

What the hell are you writing? The chapters are repeated and I still can't understand them. I don't know who are the people with high scores.

Dislike. The title is incorrect. There is also chaos. When I looked at it, I felt like it was stuck one after another. One section to the east and one section to the west.

Author, how did you write? There is no plot about resurrection, so you directly resurrected Otto. How did you write this plot? Logically speaking, shouldn't we write how Theresa resurrected Otto first?

Chapter 4 and Chapter 5 have the same content

As you write, pre-civilized people have no reaction at all to Kiana's success, and the Star Iron people still have a preachy attitude towards Kiana's teacher.

The content is bad, the title and content don't match, and it's also messy.

If you don't know how to change it, don't change it. After you change it, won't you look at it yourself?

The writing is outrageous. A pre-civilized person would immediately know it was Fu Hua when he saw it. The revelation of the final authority was also very bland.