Hong Kong Comprehensive: the Four Magical Skills of Shaolin at the Beginning

The protagonist licks her vagina, Gwen approaches the protagonist to apply for a job, the two of them are assassinated, the protagonist kills them, and they are safe. Then Gwen's father threatens the protagonist that if something happens to Gwen, he will do something to the protagonist, and the protagonist whispers and promises that everything will be fine, and he accepts it.

Come on, the protagonist starts giving away his daughter.

Damn it, I'm such a big succubus lolita. Author, you tricked me into a trap and you didn't fill it in. What do you mean?

There should be some harem involved, it's boring to write a time travel novel without any desires or demands.

Excellent reviewer, Lux, arranged everything clearly

I suggest the author get some young wives or something, it would look more enjoyable, or even married women, it just depends on how the author arranges it.

The protagonist is too indecisive and it doesn't feel very good.

Give you an opportunity. Use your phone's Pinyin key to type 9 three times and 7 twice. This is an opportunity for you. I believe you are the one. Act quickly.

The barrage is a lot of nonsense. Netizens are so imaginative. After seeing Sister Zhou time travel with their own eyes, no one thought that Sun Wukong was a time traveler. A person who has just time traveled can cause a butterfly effect. Write less barrage spoilers. The more you write, the more contradictory it will be.

Dear author, it was not Zhuge who borrowed arrows from the boat. I suggest you change it. Search online on the Three Kingdoms Policy. Not everything in the Romance of the Three Kingdoms is true history.

Is there a female protagonist? Is it a single heroine or multiple heroines? Are there any plots about having an affair or pretending to give away a daughter? Author, you have to tell the truth!

They have all traveled through time and were controlled by the system to do things they don't like.

I really can't write a book properly.

So many chapters add up to 90,000 words... One chapter has seven pages, three pages of the original plot, and four pages of lottery and the protagonist's psychological activities... Which means there is no plot at all... Hard water

More updates and then some pictures from the harem. Subscription packages have increased a lot.

... It feels like there is no clear outline and little driving force. Moreover, the plot is all about taking care of the family, and the protagonist's sense of presence is also a bit weak.

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