Tomb Raiding: Becoming an Ancient God, Starting with the Indestructible Divine Body

I don't know what it's about. In Dragon Snake, breaking the void and seeing the gods are not bad and beating these tomb robbers, isn't it Superman beating ordinary people?

The author does not create atmosphere or foreshadowing. I don't know how to write about emotions, so my writing is very dry. The protagonist kills a bear with one move. For such a pretentious thing, the author didn't even express the emotions. You are already pretending to be a dick. It's like setting up a small emotion, so where does the emotion explode? Of course it's on the side of bystanders. Fatty's reaction, Hu Bayi's reaction, Yingzi's reaction. You don't write about their reactions? How can we reflect the protagonist's awesomeness? Readers' emotions need to be driven by the emotions of the characters in the book

Why is it so unpleasant to write? God is not bad, what did you write? The adopted girl is also always putting off waiting for the girl to take the initiative, and wants to give away some of everything she gets. The key is to forget about giving away, and give it to outsiders first. You may as well give it to your own woman for self-defense. Very unhappy

This author is really Chunyun, the Immortal Thief of Liuku, the Immortal Seeing God, and the Golden Crow Meditation. The three of you already mean that you have fully cultivated your spirit, energy, and spirit, and you have also exhausted the entire Qilin to prevent poison? Funny? Your Liuku can eat poison as food, and even eat rice dumplings! Moreover, you can go to New Moon to buy a hundred-year-old Qilin. If you go to King Lu to find a thousand-year-old Qilin, you can find a blue-eyed fox on your belt. Unless you are a ten-thousand-year-old, if you buy this thing with 50 points, does he also deserve 50 points? No one really thinks that is Qilin blood, right? That thing is a unicorn vine, placed in the belly button of a corpse, and you spend points to buy it? I have a brain for clubbing!

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Now that the system has been written and invincible, then it will be invincible to the end. Some cannon fodder comes out of nowhere and gives the protagonist two large sums of money. The protagonist works hard to gain some strength. As a result, any person on the roadside is better than the protagonist. This routine is no longer popular. The protagonist is talented and has a system to provide various resources. However, a random passerby on the roadside has nothing. He needs talent but no talent, needs resources but no resources, and has no training. So the protagonist works hard for a long time to kill him????? Is this protagonist such a waste??? Is the original trio of tomb robbers too sexy????

The moment I saw Da Jinya talking about the mobile phone transfer, he decisively withdrew. The original plots of tomb robbing and ghost blowing out the lamp were so perfectly timed. The author didn't write it and just wrote a hodgepodge. Is there anyone who really likes this?

You give all the good things to others, and now you don't care about your childhood sweetheart who is dependent on the protagonist?

In the original novel, this woman repaid her kindness with evil several times, although she was cleared in the end. But this kind of woman is really disgusting. It's not like there are no girls anymore, just don't want someone like Aning.

The Holy Mother started out of nowhere. Hu Bayi didn't do anything, and the protagonist taught him how to practice, as if he had lost his mind.